Reviews for Unable to Breathe
StyxxsOmega chapter 2 . 4/9/2018
Sounds interesting so far! Loving it! Please write more when you can.
littleboyblack17 chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
The summary was really great sad to see it hasn’t been updated in a long time
CherepMikhailov chapter 2 . 5/8/2017
what? nice story? but what is happ3ning?
Silly Lolly chapter 2 . 12/15/2016
This story is amazing! Please update! I can't handle this cliff hanger.
Bianca1512 chapter 2 . 12/11/2016
Continua!
Chino chapter 2 . 11/30/2016
Please update. The summary was so captivating and I would love to see how the story turns out
LivyLoo22 chapter 2 . 9/7/2016
Update plz!
CloudCarnivore chapter 2 . 12/27/2015
Hope you update soon! Please~
Aveline01 chapter 2 . 9/21/2015
Wow, this is just so good. I can't wait until you update. I really wondering what will happen, you have no idea how evil it was when the chapter just stopped. And I also started to wonder how Percy's and Apollo's relationship will develops. I can see it be in so many different ways and when you write so short chapters (nothing wrong with that btw) so will I always know what's is going on to happen next.

But in summary:

I love your story. Keep up the good work, and please do not stop writing

And sorry if my English is bad, it's not my first language and I'm too tired to see this through so thoroughly right now.
TheDeadOne28 chapter 2 . 9/17/2015
WHAT WHAT HAPPENED
marsupeler chapter 2 . 9/17/2015
this is sooo gpppd, please update again, like sooooooooooooo oo o ooooon
wittyusernames chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
Aweh!~
The-Scorned-Prophet chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
Dun dun da holy schist what happens next
monkeybaby chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
Can't wait for the next chapter
MJ-Booklover chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
Wow.
I like this storyline!
But I can't believe I have to wait still Saturday though...
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