If my dad was not not home i would be laughting like a crayzy person this is funny as h*** XD (sorry for bad spelling)

5 to 6 hours to write a chapter or even loger, but I try not to make them to sort so they are as long as I can stand to write, it seems like I write forever then I look it over and it wasn't nearly as much as I thought I wrote! IT SUCKS!

.perfect.

I love this fanfic omg 'A'

.Gob…THIS WAS AWESOME! And too cute! I freakin luv this pairing. U did awesome with the writing. :)

My feels...They are broken. 3
Thank you for writing this! :D

I LOVE this ( :

I'm so happy! I've been waiting to see when they would get together.

I was so involved in the story my heart was pounding waiting to see Cilan's reaction.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

... Words cannot possibly express how tremendously happy I am right now... ;_; Thank you... So much... For writing this... Chapter. It was sooo... Beautiful... And... Adorable... I... I... *cries* And to think that you dedicated it to me... I truly feel special...

I can't believe it's over... Although... The ending was perfect... Your description is so damn beautiful. This: "His senses had completely overwhelmed him. Any form of logical thinking had utterly deserted him. All he felt was a play of hot and cold. He could feel the freezing air caressing his skin, making it even more sensitive. Yet he felt like a burning furnace was inside him." That... Is one of the many descriptions that make this chapter so amazingly beautiful... ;_;

Come on, the rose means something, eh? Ehh? It does, doesn't it?

If you don't write another story soon, you better pray to god that I don't kill you. You may think I'm joking now, but just you wait...

A bit sad that this is the second last chapter but excited for the next one!

Why the hell would you end it there! It was getting sooo good! Dx Now you really have to update sooner!
Heh heh... Ash reads a book on how to confess. That's so damn cute! xD Funny, too, 'cause I can actually imagine him doing that!
For a second, I thought you spelled "chirped" wrong when you wrote "chirruped," and I was like, "Heh heh. What's this? A mistake? Yes... Finally. I can correct her instead of her correcting me..." But then I checked to see if it was actually a word, and I was shocked. Lol! xD But... Some day... Mark my words, I will correct you. It's become one of my goals in life.
I killed over at the part where Cilan was like, "Is the salad dry? Do you need a glass of water?" Lol.
I have to know what happens next, you know that, right? ;D ;D

Aww I love it! So cute!

Omg! This story is so AWESOME! cafemocha4eva! :D

It's "inquire," not "enquire," good sir. :) But I'm sure you already knew that. You just didn't catch it, did you? XD

Hmm... If I have to be honest, this chapter didn't seem as detailed as the others (not to say that it wasn't a good chapter, don't get me wrong here.) I don't know, I just felt that at certain moments, it wasn't as well thought out as the rest of the chapter. Like, when Cilan was talking on the phone with his brothers - it just seemed a little rash. I don't know. That's just my opinion, I could be wrong here.

But I really did like the chapter! I like where this is going!

A pink rose not fully opened yet... Hmm... It sounds sort of symbolic in a way. Maybe it's to symbolize that their feelings haven't been fully expressed yet? :) Sorry, sorry. It might not mean that, or anything at all, for that matter. I just like to read into things. D: Maybe a little too much...

really good chapter, i feel sorry for ash, look forward to see what happens next