Wow! I lived this! Such an orginal idea and plot! I wish I could come up something this good! Keep up the good work and write more please!

;-; its beautiful... but you seem to suffer from the same thing as tav... stop putting your work down! its amazing.

You need to work on your verb tenses. It would also help if you broke some of the larger paragraphs up so that it is easier on the eyes.

Other than that, great job! I really enjoyed this fanfiction.

well, now I feel depressed.. like really man,

I've read this story multiple times. Every time I do, I seem to have the same problem. I can't read the words through my tears.

that was an awesome story...like, amazing. I loved it, and I'll Definitly read it again. best wishes with your writing.

Dear Gog why do you have to be such a good writer? My feels... what did you do to my feels? This has exactly the right amount plot twists and revalations (dang it cant find right words) and it made me both happy and sad. I like the way you implied that Tavros was dead, but then was like "NOPE he's alive." :) Anyways this was a really good fic to read and wish you good fortune on whatever else you decide to write (which I probably won't read because MY FEELS WHAT DID YOU DO TO THEM!) ;A; :3

QQ i can't stop crying this is story is good and you win award for making me cry like a baby QuQ

THAT WAS REALLY CONFUSING AND DEEP AND GOOD AND WORTHY OF THE HUSS. GOOD JOB.

Oh my god. When I heard this story would make me cry I sorta laughed it off. But- hrrjahtauty. I got teary-eyed during the memo and by the end I had thrown down my glasses with a sharp "No!" and proceeded to sob grossly into my pillow

I...don't know what to say. I love PBJ, and this story really saddened me. Good saddening, you know what I mean. Besides the fact that I got very confused at some points over the mixed up syntax and word tenses, I really liked this.

DARN YOU I STARTED CRYING LOUDLY APPARENTLY AND MY BROTHER NOTICED AND DBFKDSBIOHBRDFPIHTPFGDH FXNYHTFHM THIS STORY IS AMAZING YET I HATE THE SADNESS BUT STILL AMZING MY BLOB WHAT IS THIS

ANYWAYS DEPRESSING TAVROS MAKES EVERYONE DEPRESSED.

Awww ;_; I really liked this story. But I was crying throughout the whole thing XD