| Reviews for The Veldt |
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   Nurisiliel chapter 2 . 3/3 I like your Ali, she's an interesting character. But you made a small mistake. She already knew that Godric is Eric's maker, he told her before. |
| S.A chapter 20 . 11/6/2016 Nice! I really like your story, please update soon! |
| MOKA CASTILLO chapter 20 . 6/12/2015 Please make more chapters |
| Lycan Lover 411 chapter 20 . 2/1/2014 Dude I love this! Just read the entirre thing over a ouple of days and it's just the business! Really really cool! :D |
| Snowball A.K.A. WinterWolf chapter 20 . 8/9/2013 can't wait for more! |
| NIGHTSCREAM chapter 20 . 8/8/2013 Good fic, keep up the good work. |
| parchment faery17 chapter 20 . 7/24/2013 This is a really great story. I can't wait to read more. Please add more chapters soon. |
| rukoitalian65 chapter 20 . 7/20/2013 Love the fic! It's very nice how you change the story line, and made the story unique! Can not wait for te next update! :) |
| SaySomethingNiceDarling chapter 2 . 6/3/2013 um eric told her he was his maker and later on you made it seem like she didnt know until she said it |
| blathana chapter 20 . 5/3/2013 agh...i need more! please, please, please update soon...please |
| blathana chapter 15 . 5/3/2013 wow- i am really getting into this story and I want to review now even though I'm not finished yet! i really like the characters you has created. their relationships really give depth to the story. so sad to see aline decision to have to alter families memories to protect them. |
| Hapsgurl80 chapter 20 . 2/17/2013 Awesome chapter please update soon |
| downbelowgirl chapter 20 . 2/13/2013 I still love the creativity of your plot and how you use the different sups. |
| Godric Fan chapter 19 . 1/8/2013 Where did you go! Things are really coming together with this story! Please come back to us and make some readers really happy! There arent nearly enough good Godric storie out there and we need you! |
| Hapsgurl80 chapter 19 . 12/21/2012 Awesome chapter please update soon |
