I really like this I think you should do a sequel

Im not sure how to take this tbh

OMG the drama and the "touchy subjects". Not many writers write about that and are able to have their protagonists survive or deal with it well. This was a unique twist on things. I look forward to reading more of your work.

"So how long are you going to play this game, Jane." OH MY GAWD!

Sweet!

What happened to Jane uncle

I'm sorry I was reading this and frankly it only got worse and worse first mauras the innocent one janes the badass. Second. I decided to stick with this cuz jane grew some balls but seriously janes has pride and integrety u made her out to be some halfass loser and jerk. I'm not going to finish this story
And I'm sorry we obviously don't view jane rizzoli the same way
Like the plot tho janes dominate

I love this chapter!
Hot, hot and even more hot!
Off to read more. Loving this story a lot. :D

Okay that was..dark and twisty. I felt sorry for Jane. :( I want to give her a hug and make her feel better. I don't think Maura would ever do that to a person but it was well written.
Off to read the next chapter.

I still hate her. I pretty much hope everyone dies sans Jane and Maura's brother. No redemption.

I um... Is this rizzles? I usually won't stop a story just because it makes me uncomfortable but the first rape I could let slide but this? I'm not sure I want to continue. I can't see how this coud "get better".

I'm going to take your word for it and see but Maura's character is pretty much poisoned for me at ths point.

The way you switch character POV's suddenly makes this very difficult to read. That aside, the plot has me hooked.

Absolutely amazing! More to come? A wedding? There's the whole Carlo thing :)

I know this is only the 2nd chapter & there are 13 more to go through at this point, but even I, who considers themself fairly open-minded, found this chapter viscerally disturbing. Maura has basically raped Jane twice thus far. The only happy ending I can imagine right now is if Maura and her accomplices rot in jail or die. This couldn't possibly be the beginning of a love story, and if it's not meant to be one, I'm gonna at least read it through for any redeeming traits.

I'v never cried this much 4rm only reading a fic,t'was very well ploted, best fic story ever..you're the best hands down