I loved this FF and I like how raph actually shows what big of a softie he is and how Mikey no matter how many times he falls or has been called the most hurtful things by his own brothers he will still go all the way to protect them and even if he dies trying atleast he will know that his bros are safe. 3 Words...
This is amazing!

I love that s so much!

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Ty8 here, and I thought this was a great first story! You might want to work on more detail next time to make it a bit longer, but it was a great story for your first! My first was a 4 chapter story of block paragraphs... *grins sheepishly*

Great story loved it!

Amazing Story! :-)

This is incredible! I've been through a lot of authors and usually their first work isn't half as good as this! Nice job! Have you stopped writing? Please continue writing! You are my favorite one shot author.

Awwwwww. The fluff of pancakes is in here AHHH TO CUTE FOR ANY MORE WORDS! *squees*

When it's really needed, Mikey's natural talent let's him really step up his fighting. Go Mikey!

awesome story!

Great story! So adorable! Raph and Mikey moment at the end! :) 3

Hell yes, Mikey killed Shredder.

Except for a few very minor things, this is really good. It doesn't look like a first fanfiction. Grat job!

I love this story so much! I can't stop reading it! I love Mikey too! :D

I really liked it your an excellent writer. I can't believe this is your first story. Just amazing job with descriptions I could imagine the entire story with out feeling lost. I love Mikey centric and this is a classic Mikey centric plot with your own little twist. I also loved how you went to the fluff after the angst. Perhaps if you write other Mikey centric stories you could mention Mikey being great at art. I like to imagine he is an artist.

Nice story