Though I love this story with a passion I can't quite explain, I can't help but feel that you're a bit unfair towards Scott, and even Allison. In a situation like that, circumstances are everything. Was Scott coming over to Allison's place? Had they made plans to see each other? Moreover, why would Derek kidnap Stiles, of all people? It wouldn't make sense to Scott. I do agree that in the first seasons, Scott is kind of an ass to Stiles, but he does care about him deeply, and Stiles doesn't really doubt that (I think? I'll admit I don't remember all that much from the first 2 seasons). In the next seasons, Scott is a truly amazing friend to everyone, and especially Stiles. Anyway, rant over, and amazing job on this story! The writing is on point, and though the characterization could be more accurate, it's more than alright. Good job! Keep on writing

This is so amazingggg... This is all what i use to think about stiles ...about his feelings about his pain his sacrifices..his human strength and about so much more related to stiles... Finally i found someone like me who care about stiles so much ... Thanks for this fic... I am loving it.

Really good story! There were a few mistakes but your writing was compelling, so I loved it! The plot was nice too and I'm glad you didn't make this a Stereck story (well a tiny bit but I can live with that), and your portrayal of the characters was good. A superb story to read. I can't wait to read more of your work! Good job!

Wow, Derek is literally worse than Peter to Stiles. He’s being a crap Alpha, and not teaching his beta(s) at all. Isaac acting like his father; Erica eventually hitting Stiles with a part of his Jeep which could have killed him since she obviously doesn’t know her own strength, and throwing him in a dumpster because he won’t check her out. Then both of them acting like big bullies, not to mention Derek yelling at Scott about being obvious, and then Erica not even going through a slow transformation. Sorry this turned into a rant. Derek just did everything wrong. He needs Stiles on his side, needs to stop being an asshole, not SEDUCE Erica into the Bite; especially considering his past with Kate - he would have just turned 16. I can’t wait to see that self righteous, self absorbed, betraying ass get what’s coming to him. I really don’t like Scott.

Not going to lie I was scared there for a minute

Scott McCall you Lil bitch

MMMHH THE FEELS

This is by far my favorite Teen Wolf fanfic!

i really really Like this story!
like how realistic it is particulary how realistic Derek is
cause he is big bad wolf, his bihaviour needs to be brutal
add here that he does everything for the sake of Stiles as a really important person to him NOT a lover
and i ADORE how you show their close relashionship without obvious slash
we need more fanfiction of this and other Stiles pairings with something in the middle of close REALISTIC friendship and something more
oh, and i Like how short you make previous chapter, it really makes necessary effect making us concentrate correctly
keep going, i am already waiting for next chapter of yours Peter\Stiles!

Man this was one hell of a ride ! Have to say i loved it! Kickass job.

Wasn't that a emotional roller-coaster of terror and tears. Seriously, ouch.

I loved it please update more

Oh my gosh. I love you. Really. That was amazing.

Good Job! I loved this chapter :P People can whine all they want about cliffhangers. You would not be the first author to only have a few paragraphs as a chapter. A chapter ends when it reaches a logical conclusion for multiple reasons. Well done. It could have been made a part of the previous chapter, or the beginning of the next, but it works perfectly s a stand alone chapter for pacing.

I'm very perplexed about the ending ... I don't think Scott deserve in any way Stiles forgiveness is kind of like Derek said "Scott always ends up with everything, while Stiles always loses something " From the beginning it wasn't fair for Stiles (I feel) ... Anyway well written story, very intense feelings I felt...