This is fantastic!

Hi, me again, found another of your fics that is absolutely amazing and currently unfinished, so thought I'd ask again for you to pretty, pretty please update? This one in particular is just so heartbreaking, but in the best of ways. And, once again, your characterizations are simply perfect, but they just seem so much more sincere in the plot you've crafted. So, update soon please, because I really, really want to know what happens next.

Freaking awesome story! So well written and original I really hope you finish this and not let a potential masterpiece incomplete.

This is absolutley amazing. I love Tim and own all of the Red Robin comics. I want to give you a salute because keeping track of all the story lines as they bounce through the different series is impressive. I really enjoy this and although i wish that everyone would just get smacked in the face with everything Tim's done, i love the perspective on this and you are handling the bouncing time lines really well. I look forward to more Bart Tim bonding.

Wow. I love the way this story is laid out. I love the jumps inbetween time periods. And I love that you included Tim's pre-reboot history.

You've successfully merged comic canon with cartoon canon. It flowed seamlessly. The story overall, flowed nicely as well. The characters were spot on in their characterization. I really enjoyed the Santa Barbara bit. Is this going to be a continual thing throughout the story? I like it kind of being Tim and Bart's bff thing.

Great job. I'm enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next chapter - is that Jason we're going to see?

P.S. Caroline Hill. One of his more amusing undercover roles. Love that you included it.

Wow, I've learned so much about Tim's life from reading this story.

Which is good, because I could never dedicate myself to reading the comics.

:( So much angst, it's so potent, I keep reading the scenes and going 'they are such good friends!' and then realizing 'dear god it's all going to end NOOOOO!'

DX It's so awesome and sad at the same time!

;) Sorry it's a short review, I've been gone for a week, lotsa stories to catch up on!

Ally

Haha it took me a lot longer to read this than it should have.(for once in my life, I actually had things to do today.)

Anyway...

DANG!

I'm not even sure of what I could really say to express how awesome this chapter was.

Keep up the good work, this story is quickly becoming one of my favorites on here.

First thought: confusion galore. But that confusion just lead to interest and now I'm seriously wondering how you're going to pull this off. But I know it's going to be amazing no matter how you do it, and really I'm excited to see how you write Tim and Bart.

Love the start and I can't wait for your next chapter!

Ouch, you made my heart pang! :'(

Poor Bart, I'm still Wally-fan all the way, but POOR BART! That was a BRILLIANT idea, I never thought about how it would effect Impulse to have to leave everyone behind. And because he's so far in the future, probably never see them again.

On an off topic note, what is it with you(us, if I think about it) and hurting speedster stories?

I look forward to how you write out the next chapters, that was so sad to read, just so sad...

Ally

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter:) also, I like the way you did the time differences.

I almost cried when he left and Tim wasn't there. And he's so much like Wally in that he's a people pleaser. Cuz I know that he would smile like nothing was wrong if everyone had been there to way goodbye.

Loved it!

That was freakin sad! :(

But really good.

Interesting concept though, I've never seen this done before on FF.

I'm pretty interested in seeing what happens in the next few chapters!