Wow. This is a really good story. I think this is the only story that has Percy and Annabeth fight in the beginning. I really like it.

that was pretty good!

hahahahah no freaking way percy didn't just say that lmao

Ha
Cool

Dude it's an AU. It's SUPPOSED to be different than the book. Great writing but what happened to rachel? Bcs Percy kisses annabeths but I don't remember him breaking up with rachel

Amazing storyline,luved it

You are such a good writer! Oh my god, please

One. Percy would never cheat on ANYBODY. two Calpso is trapped on a deserted three, Percy is a DEMIGOD who stoped going to school at like 16 because of important quest

I know you would be laughing seeing my username, but believe me, it's true. I am the great god Posedon. In this stupid out of order fan fiction, you made my son look stupid, and believe me, I'll take my revenge. HAKUNA- MATATA, BEWARE.
WHEN YOU BECOME PROUD
DO LOOK AROUND
YOU WON'T NOTICE ME
BUT I SHALL CURSE YOU WITH GLEE.
NEMESIS SHALL BE WITH ME TODAY,
THE SEA SHALL TAKE ITS REVENGE EVERYDAY,
HAKUNA-MATATA BEWARE,
AND TAKE THIS CHANCE IF YOU DARE
YOU'LL SOON ENTER THE GHOSTS LAIR,
AND SUFFER THERE WITHOUT CHARON'S FARE.
-POSEIDON
GREEK GOD OF SEA AND EARTHQUAKES.

sweet

To MyniggalovesKFC: Stop being an ass this story was amazing nobody has time for your useless tips for improvement because everyone is not a pervert like you are

HOW DA HELL DO YOU EVEN COME UP WITH THESE PLOTS!?
Seriously that was a piece of art expressed through words and I loved it. In my Top 5 favourites fanfics.

GO PERCY, NOT ANNABETH

Somebody tell me why violence against men is, um normalized? Punching men, kicking men is normalized in most of these stories. But if a man hits a woman (they shouldn't) that's a big crime they should go to jail for. But when women does it it's fine? Double standards much?

This sucks. I fucking hate it when people are judgemental and fucking act upon it. It doesn't matter what problems you have, but no one has the right to act like the way Annabeth does. I fucking hate you Annabeth and by extension the story.