A decent start; a shame there's not more to this. There are some technical errors and a few writing choices are weak, but the overall premise is promising and engaging. Hopefully we'll see more of this story someday.

And then? This is such an interesting story as details about Antenora and Vinsfield were so scarce in the game, almost a side cast. They could have went much further with Antenora's story, but they didn't. Such a shame, that. At any rate, I hope to see more.