Your grammar (mostly spelling) needs work, but the story is good. I'd very much like to see this continued.

An interesting story, pity it hasn't been updated for awhile. Still, I like your writing style and the OC. I'm interested in seeing what you had planned

Loving the story so far cant wait till u get to the next part this seems to be going in a good direction hope u dont get off course and hope u update soon

Nice. Since Sai has the new jutsu does he know that Tsunade lied and that Mai is not really ok?

WOW this was so so great and i cant wait for more!

as always an enticing chapter

Aw. - Sai

Great chapter! 3

this is so cute please keep it up

Great story and chapter! Update soon. :)

I really like the story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! :)

Me like cant wait for the update

'Sweet' is the best description for this chapter, I guess. :)

That's cool how he communicated. :D Aww, she trusts him! That was ingenious her wanting to see his face before she wakes up. I can't wait to read your next chapter. :) Good work!
I did notice the first line: "A couple of days passed; Sai, along with team Kakashi, was assigned to guard duty on a 24 hour bases." It should be 'basis'. Anyway.
I love your story! Keep it up! :)

In Christ,
Timber Wolf

Aww! :D. At least she has something she's not afraid of and they're figuring out what's wrong. That was so sweet that she looked like that to Sai. _

In Christ,
Timber Wolf

You have a typos and spelling errors, otherwise, great chapter!