Story hasn't been updated in like 4 years so idk if my review will be meaningful, but ah well. About 6 chapters in and this is my biggest complaint. Samus's only motivation here is to fix her ship and get off this planet yet she's content to just piss away her time hanging out with these horsies. Makes each chapter feel kind of aimless. I remember reading this story many years ago and I had the same feeling. It never goes anywhere.

I have so many problems with this story. Samus has a gun, she has the upper hand. Why nerf her so bad and destroy her character?

UPDATE!

Very nice story so far. I'm pleased with this. I didn't expect Trixie to take such a huge role, but your portrayal of her is very enjoyable and believable. Same goes for Samus herself. I was not really surprised when Luna slapped Samus in that earlier chapter during the trial. Samus almost seemed to be asking for it (like a term of endearment).

On another note, I'm not looking forward to mass pony genocide by the federation. In reality, that's likely what would happen since they pretty much just wouldn't take the ponies seriously. Us humanoids can be so mean haughty heartless and greedy.

wow just wow your strory is so cool I love it and I hope the next chapter will be realise soon

I can't beleiv I missed this! I can't wait to see what happens, this is getting interesting! :)

i like your writing style to start off with. other pros are long chapters, great story, i could go on and on. keep up the good work

TOP KEK with the meme and Also nice I have read the story from the first Chapter along time ago and I found it again I squealed when I saw 1 chapter go into 21 (PS: I totally ship Samus and Trixie now cause of this story)

Great to see more chapters from you. The new chapters were a welcome addition to the story, and I look forward to new ones, whenever you have them ready.

This was well worth the wait! Nice job! :) I liked that cameo last chapter, so funny! :) Keep it up! :)

Pretty awesome latest chapter.

Love that some of Samus' old neighborhood has started to show up in Equestria.

Whether for good or ill.

Knew it had to happen eventually.

I'm glad you're still updating, these two chapters were great

Oh man I've missed this, and these were two fun chapters to read too.

they need to make a metroid game where the federation is an open enemy as well as a metroid breakout. be nice to see samus kicktheir asses for once.

Little Timmy Tinbot did absolutely NOTHING this chapter! How is he gonna be any help? Is he just gonna be there just because? Is he there to do things like squeezing through spaces Samus can't fit through?

And what is with that birdy-bot thing that dropped outta orbit? Is it going to be a nuisance later on?! Is it going to go on a rampage and cause general mayhem? WILL ANYTHING GO RIGHT FOR SAMUS AGAIN?! Who knows... oh wait, YOU do! Hope you pop out the next chapter soon!