Really nice fanfic! Hopefully, we get to see how this ends soon.

It is sad to hear the collective separated. Maybe you will get back together in the future the same way music bands do; or maybe one of the remaining writer will finish this story as their own project?

Certainly looking forward to the next part of the story. Great job everyone involved. Hope you are doing alright despite covid-19. Keep us posted.

Loving it. Can't wait to find out what happens next. )

Great story. So many things unresolved:
- the bomb at the party where Gohan is going to have to show off some of his skills with Videl injured and the number of people involved... flying as Phoenix in front of Videl would be pretty cool.
- paparazzi photos sure to reach Hercule. How is he going to take it?
- Erasa will read straight through Videl about what happened at his house (great depiction in the fic) - sure to be a fun moment
- how is Videl going to take learning about the delivery boy and the z-fighter skills... Gohan being half saiyan?
- Goku and Chichi meeting Videl
- Bulma?

One of the best part of a story I have read in this universe with these characters. Shame it ended so quickly... All the best!

So? You still alive. Serious question.

I can't do this anymore. It was starting out so good, then you wrapped it up in lies. Where's the humor? This should really be reclassified as romance/drama.

Please come back and update this story.

Good story, hopefully an update will still come.

It’s been more than 2 years since the last chapter. Randomly remembered this story one day and had to dig in my memories to find it. Such a great story with so much potential. Truly a loss to fanfic readers everywhere that this gem will go incomplete. Thank you to those that worked on this. Hope you’re doing well

Man, I was soooo looking forward to an ending to this, but I should have seen that coming when I started the other day since this isn't labelled as completed. I really started to love this story since it is so different than the normal power level measuring that usually goes on in DBZ stuff.

Too bad I doubt this will ever be finished, but I will hold out hope and put this on my favorites in case that ever happens :)

Read ya later!

This is good! I hope you continue and finish it sometime!

This has no reason to be Dragonball.

Love the story, nice how it took some time for some secrets to be revealed. Also Gohan showing her a couple of techniques beforhand is nice. Their relationship doesn't feel rushed, although technically only 2 weeks, except maybe the sex scene though they are 21 so maybe not even for Virgins.
Waiting for the next part.