I hope this isn't just a one shot.. would love to see Naruto and Team 8, Hyuga reactions to her being prego

can you write a squeal please

I enjoyed it, cute sweet and passionate. I'd love to see a sequel to it. see how things go for Naruto and Hinata with a baby on the way and a war around the corner. It would be an amazing story.

I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters pretty please.

A little fast but good

Not bad. The flashback made me want to see that episode. I really do have a LOT of catching up to do. Considering it was written in third person I liked it, an even more shocking was the fact it was a one shot. I'm usually not a big fan of one shots, but this had just the right amount of detail that it made up for it not being a chapter story. It was pretty well written too. I could sleep, so I checked this out. That and you said you'd take a look at mine so I though it only right to return the favor. This was pretty good, nice little surprise at the end too.

i love it make more as of this story tell how she tells naruto and every detail in between

Very nice. To say this was your first lemon I have to admit this was an admirable endeavor. There are some spelling issues that kind of marred the experience but they're not enough to derail this sweet love story. With practice you could very well be on your way as one of the masters of the oh so tangy and tasty citrus known as the lemon. Looking forward to your progress in future fics and perhaps more dealing with the Naruto universe. Until next time, Ja ne!

I do hope your gonna continue this I am looking forward to the next chapters

This is a pretty good lemon, just a few things to help.
1) Keep your verb tenses straight.
2) Try to stay true to the character. And
3) Don't go too fast. This one was pretty good, but any faster and it wouldn't feel like it could be real.

this is a good story.