I know it's been years but I really really love this story. Best wishes in whatever it is you're doing now!

I really like your story. And in this, is Zach's mom still part of the circle?

Suspense I LOVE IT! Hope you write another great chapter

BROO! UPDATE!

Ooooooo busted! Update soon!

This aamazing! ! ! ! so creative and well written. Will there be more? I hope so!

Oh gosh I loved the ending! It sounded so intense and intimidating! I can't wait to see what Solomon does to Zach!

great story continue!

Amazing. You are a fantastic writer. Keep writing and good job.

oh no Solomon caught Zach. You should make Solomon like SUPER protective of Cammie. Like a father figure who will kill if he feels she's in danger

This is super good

Hmmmm, very interesting. This chapter may not have been as exciting/interesting to read as the last one, but I understand that it was necessary. I did like the bit of dialogue between Cammie and Co. though I do wish you would have put some of Zach's thoughts in as he listened to it. Again, this chapter was very well written, with no grammatical errors that I found.

I'm looking forward to see where this story goes, because I think it has huge potential. You're a really good writer, and are able to weave a pretty fascinating plot line. I'm really looking forward to Zach meeting Joe...hahahaha. I hope we get more Cammie/Zach interaction soon, it makes me sad to hear him say stuff like "finding the best way to eliminate her." Update soon! :D

I really like the way you tell the story and describing it. AND I love the plot/idea b/c it's really interesting!

sounds like a great story... update!

Love these long chapters :) update soon!