Oh it was good!

I know this is old, but this is absolutely beautiful! I love the depth and emotion you give to Riza, and the stark contrast of her Father and Roy both in personality and meaning to her. Part of this may have had a sad theme, but it was a joy to read. Very well done!

this was so deep

That was really intense. I like the ending and the introspection of the story.

Wow...

Incredible. Wonderful. I loved it.

So beautiful! I think you captured her relationships with both well

wow. this is beautiful. I usually don't read rated M fics because of the adult scenes but when I scanned your work and saw it had no explicit ones, I thought it won't be a harm to read. It turns out this is one good story! Nice work on Riza's perspective!

Incredible. Incredible. Incredible. This was a stunning read. Thank you for sharing it.

So after reading this, I am chilled. Not in that Have-a-glass-of-iced-tea-on-a-hot-and-humid-Georgia-afternoon either. And I must say, you really have a way of ending your fics well. That last line is pretty awesome and resonates. Good work!

I wonder why no one has reviewed this yet? This is a one-shot perfectly written :)