That was so sweet and simple and elegant, I was literally in tears by the end. Pure literary silk.

I like how at the end it is unclear as to who gave in. "And one of them gives in to what has been inevitable all along and leans forward, brushing lips against lips in the softest kiss and this is right, this is what everything has been leading up to all along." It's left up to the reader's imagination. It was a lovely touch.

You're a great writer. Thank you for writing this piece.

This was nothing short of breathtaking. Your writing is exquisite, and the way you described the voices in Loki's head was a nice, eerie, believable touch. I loved reading about when Thor gave Loki the necklace, this was truly worth the read. Great, well rounded story, I hope to read more from you in the future. Keep up the awesome work!

-Captivated

so sweet

Very touching; loved the day and night comparison. You always find the right words to make descriptions very vivid and you never ramble on and that's why your stories work so well. Because the sentences work together and none seems misplaced. Wonderful.