wow... i love this story and wishing for more

It's so nice to finally find a well written fanfic that is EricxRonald. It's a hard pairing to find as it is. So much love to you! Thank you! I myself have been wanting to write something for this pairing but I haven't thought up a good plot for them yet. You have created a very nice, deep plot, and i spent all day reading it. I await your next update eagerly.

I did notice a few errors in each chapter, simple things like wrong words... such as "his" instead of "this" just thought I'd mention it.

I really enjoyed your characterization of Ronald, and particularly Alan. Often, fanfic writers choose to play on his illness too much, and forget that other than that he's actually a very strong and spirited character.

Initially, the plot of this seemed very unique, but quickly wandered into generic horror-flick territory, which kind of disappointed me. There seems to be absolutely no motive behind what is going on, so the situation is just scary for the sake of being scary. I can only assume an explanation is forthcoming.

Furthermore, the story seems really rushed. Not just in cases of that plot issues or character disagreements get resolved too quickly, but just in the whole writing style. It's really unpolished. I've caught at least four typos per chapter. From my experience, it's better to wait a few days and get some people to proofread than to publish as soon as it's done.

You writing has a lot of potential but needs a bit of tweaking.

I feel bad for Alan. It must be really hard on him, especially being sick. Gah! Come on get it together and find them boys! Aww Eric and Ronnie are too sweet. Love it!

Waaaa, Alan and the others must find them on time! I believe they will
Poor Alan! And I still didn't lose my hope for Will/Alan in this story :b

Eric is so sweet with Ron :')
I can't wait for them to be safe again.
And poor Alan! He's already dealing with the thorns, now he must deal with the guilt he thinks he has :(
I want Alan to be happy :'(

Aww so cute though I do feel bad for Alan. He needs a hug really bad. I wonder what the demon will do with him now. Love it!

Oh yaaay Ronnie is alive! I feel so bad for him, not being able to trust anything. Eric will save you! Love it!

Oh poor Eric, and poor Ronald T_T
I can't see them like that, and I hope they can fight until the others can discover anything!

Woah! No! Poor Ronnie. He never really knew that Eric didn't give him up. I wonder what the good news is in all of this. Love it!

lfjkbgdjkbgdfjbgidfgdj, good news where? Is he alive, omg omg! -cries-
Ron suffers so much! I can't wait for next chapter!

Finally Alan admits it. Its good that he cleared things up a little on his end, but it makes things even harder for Eric. No! Back off Ronnie demon! Love it!

Lovely chapter. Ronald breaks my heart. Alan breaks my heart, and Eric breaks my heart even more. I just hope they find Ronald before he is lost again (even if I love broken Ronald, just to someone take care of him)

Keep up C:

Oh no! Ronnie is staying stronger than I thought he would. Still it all is really killing Eric. I hope the find him soon. So happy about this update. Love it!

Poor little Ronald is hurt again! T_T
At least Alan and Eric are taking it easy, and doing the stuff "by the rules".
William should really be called quickly, he already seemed to know some stuff.