Reviews for Wonderland
4evrDorkly17 chapter 17 . 10/13/2017
Well, it was fun while it lasted. Anyway, Thank you for an amazing adventure and an absolutely wonderful story.
4evrDorkly17 chapter 15 . 10/13/2017
"Dundunduuuuuun! Find out what happens next in the the next issue"-Cliff Hanger
Well this has made an interesting turn of events! Who freaking would have guessed that Robyn was from Hogwarts!? Interesting…
THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!:)
4evrDorkly17 chapter 14 . 10/12/2017
*Squeals!*THANK YOU FOR THIS ABSOLUTELY FUDGING FANTASTIC CHAPTER!:)
4evrDorkly17 chapter 13 . 10/12/2017
Well, I guess that would be pay back for calling her that wouldnt it. Whose Denny? LOL, but yeah that is actually pretty accurate.
*squeals* Yes! She got a kiss out of that mess of word vomit! That is a very good turn out after being laughed at.
THANK YOU FOR THE FUDGING WONDERFUL CHAPTER!:)
4evrDorkly17 chapter 12 . 10/12/2017
Sorry that I dont have a more detailed review but, THANK YOU FOR FOR THIS FUDGING FANTASTIC CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 11 . 10/12/2017
See! Look at that Spencer, cute blokes word vomit too. Its those blokes that dont that you need to watch out for. Or something. Lol that convorsation was wonderful, just wonderful. I love how it was on speaker so that Albus and who ever else in there could he–wait, was Freddy calling for /that/ specific reason?
Anyway, THANK YOU FOR THIS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 10 . 10/12/2017
Lol, well Ned Nickerbocker will definitely be and interesting topic for Spence and Zames, wont it? Lol
Did reference Ned's last name from the ice cream sundae name in the first HP book 'Nickerbocker glory'?
Oooo, shes aboit to learn about Apparating!
THANKS FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 9 . 10/12/2017
Lol I word vomit too, and no, you cant have a filter tranplanted, I would know too. I also realized that was a reference from 'The Notebook', goodness I love that story. Zames, why are you being so swoon worthy? Like, that has to be eligal for a cute boy to just grab your face, or lean in and rest forehead against forehead on said face…
I love their relationship, they are just do cute and made for eachother its-
*Clears throat*Anyway, THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 8 . 10/12/2017
Lol already arguing like an old married couple. I cant wait for James' birthday, Freddy giving out stories of Spence is going to be hilarious! Lol everyone is going to be super wary of her after, expecting an actual crazy person, then there will be a couple people who are like "she cant be that bad*finally meets her*…oh merlin she is…"
THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 7 . 10/12/2017
Lol she unknowingly inherited the family business. He'd be so proud, but peeved. I can also laughing his arse off again over finding out that he was in fact the one she threw up on.
I cant wait for whats to happen next!
THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 6 . 10/12/2017
YES! she figured it out! Lol Freddy, I hope you get whats coming to you!
THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTEER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 5 . 10/12/2017
LMAO! I cant wait for Zames to meat his best mates girlfriend. Lol his face when he finds out that is Spencer's mom! THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 4 . 10/10/2017
Yep definitely forgot, but eh, at least she now has a new friend! (Plus how many times did Spencer say that he's forgoten or was late?)
Ugh their so cute! I wouldn't blame her, Dan is a creepo.
Well there goes the rarity of cotton candy, thanks a lot, Dan.
Thank you for the the amazing chapter!
4evrDorkly17 chapter 3 . 10/10/2017
Yeeeesss. I love this so much! Lol I'm kinda like Spencer, not very good withwords and kinda insecure/paranoid with almost everything, and my people skills are crap, so I understand how she feels. I love how thid is progressing! Also, I think Spence forgot that her dad was going to take her put for ice cream, or am I just 'time' challanged?
And I think you left out the rushed sentence where James says he just wanted to spend more time with her... I dont know.
James and Spener are so cuute!
Thank you for the amazing chapter!:)
4evrDorkly17 chapter 2 . 10/10/2017
I can see why her parents relationship would bother her, it bothered me just reading it. Lol I love how youre poking fun at all the social sites(I personally am not a part of any of them). Is Spencer telling the future through her dreams? Lol Im in the hazardous club too! *Completely ignores Danny Douch Greco and goes right to James' arrival*Well isnt that curious.…
Thank you for the fantastic chapter!:)
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