I'm not sure if you'll really see this, but I checked in to see how this was going because at one point I sadly ended up losing what chapter I was on, so I still need to caught up sadly or maybe not because it still means I have some of this amazing story that I never read, both ways I was checking in to see what chapter it was and I seen this, it's really understandable that happened and as I been with this story this long I'll read the next update no matter how many years later it is, but I just wanted to say this is my favourite Fanfic ever, and even so I have not been able to read it in a long time myself I still will remember stuff from it randomly and be like gosh I love that story, the story it's self also inspired me to write Rayman Fanfic myself, even so I have yet to post them as I been busy with life and stuff myself, but honestly I'm so happy you ever post this and no matter where I'll always be glad to be able to read what was wrote, thank you so much for the amazing story

Don't give up. I love this story. Forgot about it none the less but it helped me a lot. I'd be glad to see it finished in time I'm waiting for as long as I have too. This brought me a lot of joy.

Is... This the end?

Okay, I'm gonna attempt to sum this all up, since I forgot to write reviews for some of these chapters:

So, Betilla's sisters almost killed her, the "Mysterious being" is a cat named Morgroff, who happens to be Razoff's reincarnated brother or whatever, Razoff is starting to enjoy having Vincent around a bit, Razoff made a pact with Razorbeard, Rosyetta was being chased by Robo-Pirates and ended up getting captured, Razoff is startig to bond with his "slaves" more- GYAAAAHHH! SO MUCH IS HAPPENING!

But it still is my favorite fanfiction of all time- gives me something to think about, yet keeps me on the edge of my seat- literally...

Keep up the good work!

Getting suspenseful! What was hilarious was when Rayman didn't know that Lady Rosyetta Alexander was Razoff's cousin and was flirting with her until Vincent told him. XD

Getting suspenseful! What was hilarious was when Rayman didn't know that Lady Rosyetta Alexander was Razoff's cousin and was flirting with her until Vincent told him. XD

I usually don't read extremely dark stories like this one, but it gave me the feeling where I want to ask, "What's gonna happen to Rayman? Why is Vincent like that? Why the heck does Razoff do that?" This is to sum up what I've read so far!

Let me finish his sentence
The cat

Welcome back, sweety! And you did it in a great way" Wow, this chapter felt so intense. I loved everything about it; I loved the descripition at the beginning, I loved the way you described Rayman's inner darkness, I loved how you gave Bow a point of view for the first time and I loved Vincent and his final comprehension of his real power.
I loved this chapter, more than I could imagine! Hope to hear from you and that you're having a great day right now. :3

Another awesome chapter! I liked how Bow fought back and protected Vincent. She may be small, but her love for her friends is a powerful thing. I'm also interested to see how Rayman overcomes his darkness. Nice job!

NO! VIN!
(screaming) VIN! BOW! RAY! Damnit guys, you have to be alright!

Ahhhh a new chapter! I hope you're doing better friend! -hug-

The descriptions at the start of the chapter are some of my favourites you've written, especially the part just before the ship rises, an interesting set of metaphors strung together beautifully!

Poor Vin, he gets all the torture, even when Ray is getting it! I hope they're all alright!

Yikes! Looks like Rayman and Vincent aren't out of the woods yet. This story is amazing :D can't wait for the next instalment!

I love this story, you describe details pretty good.

As always, so captivating! :D Can't wait for the next chapter!