| Reviews for My One Darkness |
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jackilantern chapter 1 . 6/25/2012 Very sweet :) I love this fiiicc! 3 *immediate favourite* If I may offer some constructive criticism, you do change tenses a lot i.e. past and present. |
KInAKuro chapter 1 . 6/24/2012 I love how cute sweet and to the point it is as for a prompt how about one where bruce is afraid he will hurt barton and when he is hulked out he saves barton and takes a big hit for him and then bruce realizes it or something and some heartbreak/emotional stuff at the start but the fluffy happiness in the end maybe _ have fun with it if you do use it _ |