| Reviews for The big one |
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  anonomous chapter 4 . 9/26/2017 PERFECT |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2013 This is seriously on of THE BEST stories I have ever read so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Update soon. Or atleast make a sequel. |
 katiemcmahonx chapter 4 . 8/16/2012 I loved it. Like, A lot! |
| Jay aka Jordan chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 Awww I cried |
| Invader Johnny chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 The beginning of the Wests, heh heh, nice! Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| Invader Johnny chapter 3 . 8/15/2012 Heh, a very interesting coincidence that Jade and Tori share the same way to calm down. Yup they envision the ideal life indeed. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| Eliley chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 cute :) |
| Jeremy Shane chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 Good Chapter & More Please |
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/3/2012 yay beautiful ending! |
| Jay aka Jordan chapter 2 . 6/22/2012 Tori is the man |
| Invader Johnny chapter 2 . 6/22/2012 Heh, it was a great proposal, it's a night that neither Jade and Tori will ever forget I assume, LOL. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| JadeLynAshley chapter 2 . 6/22/2012 That was so not rated T not that I am complaining. Keep up the good work and update soon. |
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 6/13/2012 Good Chapter & More Please |
| Dykalicious25 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012 Update please really good |
| nodaybuttoday317 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012 It's very good I like it! I'm in between the whole M rated thing. I would say yes cuz it would show how much they actually love each other, I would say no cuz most people airn't comfortable with reading sex (including me sometimes) but it's up to you! Update soon! |
