| Reviews for My Sister's Shadow |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 8/16/2019 5 years later and I just got to this |
 Embrume chapter 5 . 11/21/2014 Pretty good so far! I can't stop reading. The only thing I've really noticed is that you tell a lot instead of showing (i.e. Don't say, "the characters are going to the mall", describe them going there). Telling is really good for some things, but you don't want to use a whole lot of it. |
| rae chapter 10 . 7/18/2014 im looking forward to either your or the other authprs update on this story, been waitin 4ever lol |
| elle chapter 1 . 7/22/2013 I really wish you would continue this lovely story, but considering it's been a little over a year since it was updated, you probably won't. :/ |
| admonitio chapter 9 . 7/13/2013 Oh dear. |
| admonitio chapter 8 . 7/13/2013 She called Allie Lia. Coincidence? |
| admonitio chapter 7 . 7/13/2013 Aw. Sadness. |
| admonitio chapter 6 . 7/13/2013 So she's on the road to Ana? |
| admonitio chapter 5 . 7/13/2013 Love 3 |
| admonitio chapter 4 . 7/13/2013 I love wear this is going! |
| admonitio chapter 3 . 7/13/2013 I think she should've kept the sea glass like Liadid. |
| admonitio chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Is she gonna take the journals and read them? |
| admonitio chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 Awesome beginning! |
| Avis chapter 9 . 6/30/2013 I absolutely love everything about this story you are writing. I hope you continue to write it. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/26/2013 Oh, man. This is wonderful. Could you continue it please? |
