Reviews for Building Castles in the Sky
QU1 chapter 16 . 8/16/2013
I don't like Seto.
Yes, yes, Joey, I feel the same.
Yay! Thanks Joelle
Sorry for the long post. Your story has left us with mixed feelings.
Nice story anyway.
Shut it Joey.
KC Stone chapter 16 . 7/3/2013
You have a huge issue with tenses and sometimes there are places that are confusing, but overall I really like this story. ;D
TheSaku chapter 16 . 6/26/2013
I love *w*
This great your story
I hope the continuation soon, hopefully not too long
Seto That gives me anger, Natsu saves Lucy ..!

Kisses and Hugs -/

TheSaku
psychadelicrose chapter 16 . 6/26/2013
O-O Please let Lucy be okay!
GuiltyCrown09 chapter 16 . 6/26/2013
Well that's just great
Continue! :D
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 15 . 3/15/2013
OOHHH loved how you made Ami explain her story in the beginning and then leaves...and then Seto comes after. I wonder what he's going to do to her. I hope Lucy'll stay safe and stuff. And ooh, maybe Seto and Ami will end up together? Loved this chapter!

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Yana5 chapter 15 . 3/12/2013
:-)
GuiltyCrown09 chapter 15 . 3/11/2013
Continue! X3
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 14 . 2/26/2013
Oohh, i wonder why Lucy's scent was there...that place Natsu was at. And omg I loved how Lucy was able to summon all of her spirits. Loved the idea of Ami and her fight, and how she described the black key. Thank goodness Aries wasn't stuck in between the gates. I hope lucy will be better with her magic and Natsu too. It's funny how they're both training their magic/power/offense/defense but at different places.

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psychadelicrose chapter 14 . 2/25/2013
Woooo! Yaaaaay
rocksrcool4597 chapter 14 . 2/24/2013
Great job! :3 I really loved the Natsu pov and how how you transiti
Yana5 chapter 14 . 2/24/2013
oo go Natsu
LovingmyOTP's chapter 13 . 2/15/2013
UPDATE! This is one of the best Nalu FF's I've ever read!. And actually, I wish this was an Arc in the series of Fairy Tail. I think this would be a pretty good Arc!
Yana5 chapter 13 . 2/15/2013
poor Natsu
CupcakeGirl633 chapter 13 . 2/14/2013
OMG I think you did a really good job with the monk dude. He was really realistic, and like an actual monk, based on what he said. Loved what you did with Natsu. And yes, of course he will save Lucy. GO NALU! I hope he'll find her, and save her.

Loved this ending too btw. Loved what Erza said. It puts her more in character for some reason. Loved the thing that Gray said to Happy too. About Natsu finding a new girl, and how he thought it was Lucy. Lol! Anyways, I hope that you'll update and create the next chapter soon. It's a really great story, and I hope you will make the next chapter INTERESTING! Don't worry, this chapter was really interesting too! I looove it!

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