Could you post another chapter please.

Will you be updating anytime soon? I read this entire story (plus season one) In a whole two days.

What i want to say is, Ma'am, will we be seeing more of this season going forward? I really gotta know if i am to follow this story. :) Get back to me shoot me a message.

Ugh! Such a good chapter which leaves me with more questions and you leave it on a cliffhanger where Victor reappears?! Why?! I want to know more about the Daughters of Destiny prophecy, the girls' power advancements, etc. I am sad that I've reached the end of your story's chapters, with little to no hope for an update.

Glad that Leo has his powers back and that he and Piper are still going to try and make it work, regardless of what the Elders think. So, how did Paige tap into her Enchantress powers? So Paige isn't the first witch-whitelighter hybrid, or witchlighter. I wonder what Paige will do with the information she has gathered from Jana's journal. I like how you brought in Magic School so early into the story. I like the expansion on what you have already told us about Expellers. Is there merit to Jana's theory that the Elders are holding some kind of hidden card regarding Expellers? Glad that Paige is suspicious of Gideon.

A prophecy involving a Charmed child. Is Brianna the Daughter of Power? Would that make Andie the other Daughter of Destiny, the Daughter of Time? Or does the prophecy refer to someone else? Since Jana changed the past, will that affect the prophecy in any way? I'm glad that Phoebe has her premonitions back, but I'm sad about Jana. Still curious about how this whole new element/story that you introduced will change things and how it will end. I hate that Phoebe and Paige are at odds by the end of this chapter.

I love how you wrote one of my favorite Charmed episodes. I loved how Gordon Johnson made an appearance outside of 1924, even if it was brief. I like how you used the fan theory that Pearl is P. Russell's first name. How come the sisters didn't acknowledge that Piper and Dan's past lives were their great-grandparents? Not surprised that P. Bowen married Andy's past life. So Andy was an expeller in his past life too? Since both Andy and his past life of J. Anthony were both expellers and Andy's family has been the Warren witches' expellers, does that mean that Prue and Andy are distantly related by P. Bowen and J. Anthony's marriage? I love how you keep throwing nods to Prue's interest in photography and foreshadowing the 415 photography job that comes in future episodes. I was thrilled to have an unexpected appearance by Paige's past life, the Evil Enchantress. Totally floored by the Jana (or should I say Janiah?) reveal. I can't wait to find out more about her and the whole Enchantress plot.

I love that you incorporated Coop into "Animal Pragmatism". It does make sense considering that it was Valentine's Day. I love how Coop ships Piper/Leo, even though he put Piper and Dan together. I'm glad that he and Phoebe were scheming to get Piper & Leo together and that he was trying to keep it a secret from the disapproving Elders. I love how you incorporated Henry in this and not just as Paige's love interest. However, I don't believe that parole officers are law enforcement or would work quite so closely with the police like Henry and Andy are. I do like how Henry helped save Prue from the snake and rabbit. Brianna continues to be an interesting child and she isn't even born yet. She is a powerful witch, but not to the same extent to unborn Wyatt in the show. Is this due to her being the child of a Charmed One and an Expeller? I like the name you chose for Prue's eldest daughter. Even though I hated Paige and Jana getting hurt, I really love how you incorporated Jana into the story and was able to sideline both of them, yet keeping them as motivators to the sisters to stop the animal men. I look forward to reading more.

While it is still sad that Leo still gets his wings clipped, I'm glad that he fights to be with Piper and I know it won't be too long before he gets his powers back and that it means Dan's time is almost up. Loved the addition of Sam and Paige's relationship with him to this episode. Why are they surprised about baby Bree using her powers from the womb (and for that matter with unborn Wyatt in the show)? Unborn Phoebe gave Patty premonitions. I love that Prue's first daughter has her mother and favorite sister's power of freezing time. Glad that Prue and Jack parted more amicably in this, but it could help that they weren't dating this time around.

Yay, Prue is pregnant with Bree! I loved that you timed her finding out with this episode, in which canon Prue decided that she did want to be a mom one day. Henry! I love Paige and Henry's meet cute and how spot on it is from their meeting in Season 8's "Battle of the Hexes". I like how Dan's near-perfect parenting ability is helping Piper to realize that Dan might not be the guy for her. When Darryl mentions Sheila and Darryl Jr. when Andy and Prue tell him that they are expecting, I noticed that there was no mention of Darryl's son Michael, who was seen on the show. When Phoebe asks her sisters how many kids they think she will have, Paige says four. Is that foreshadowing to an epilogue, perhaps an alternate version of the epilogue in "Forever Charmed"? And by that I mean, will Phoebe have four daughters, whereas she eventually had three on the show? Or is that a reference to how many times Phoebe has been pregnant in canon (unborn source 3 daughters)?

Loved this chapter! I was not disappointed with Paige meeting Sam. Apparently, Prue is pregnant with Bree or about to be from Sam's conversation with Robert.

While it is a bit sad that Paige and Glen broke up, at least it was a mutual decision and an amicable split. But really it was time. They work better as friends anyways. I've noticed how much you've had Jenny appear in your rewrite of Season 2. I actually like it. The show didn't know what to do with Dan's niece and wrote her out after her fourth appearance. I really like how she sees Prue, Piper, Phoebe and Paige like the big sisters she always wanted and how she is always up to help the sisters with schemes and plans. I am surprised at how the Charmed Ones (and Andy) are allowing her to be so involved in the magic side of things. What happened to keeping the secret? I wonder if you have some bigger purpose for her.

I LOVE that you made Coop the Cupid in this. The original Cupid was great, but it makes more sense to have Coop in this role as he and Phoebe will eventually get together. Also loved how they defeated Drazi by Andy and Prue getting married. I wish Victor could have been there, but sadly he doesn't reappear until Season 3. While I like Piper/Dan, I am so ready for them to be over and for her to be with Leo. While I can understand Grams being somewhat intimidating and coarse with Andy considering how she had walked in on him and Prue while in high school, is there more to the story? Or does she believe no one is really good enough for her girls? I like how she says that she always thought Piper would be the first of the girls to be married, as she was in canon (unless you count Prue's forced dark marriage to warlock Zile in "Bride and Gloom"). Speaking of "Bride and Gloom", do you plan to cover that episode if/when you write Season 3? If so, which sister would you put in Prue's place (since you have already married her off to Andy), Phoebe or Paige? I also want to know why Grams didn't give Prue the speech about the women in their family keeping the name Halliwell, like she does for Piper's marriage to Leo in the show? And I'm quite interested in Coop wanting Andy to keep the Cupid ring. This will come up in the future, right? Continuing to love this fic!

I did like the use of your OC Jana Gwydion in this chapter/episode. She is a much more interesting and useful witch practitioner than Marcy Steadwell. I like how Andy gets to play bodyguard to Prue's Ms. Hellfire. I wish I could see what Prue's dress looks like. I look forward to reading about the wedding.

Jana makes another appearance, but a more significant one this time. I wonder if she will show up again. I like Dan, but I'm just so ready for Piper/Leo. Paige was harsh with Dan. I get that she diehard ships her sister and Leo, Leo is a friend, and Leo is he whitelighter mentor, but it's not a reason to be so rude to him. I like that you left Jack in the story. I look forward to Prue & Andy's wedding.

I really enjoyed that you made Paige the man, instead of Prue, in this episode. I just wish we knew what she looked like as a man. I really love Andy's relationship with his soon-to-be-sisters-in-law. His talk with Paige as "Manny" was pretty great. And I love how well Darryl is doing with the supernatural stuff without really knowing about it yet. While I like Glen, I just don't see him and Paige as a long-term couple like I could with Kyle Brody or Henry Mitchell.