I wish-sorta- that I was that girl, but I wouldn't do what she did in the bathroom! Stupid!

- Storm ;p

OMG! I love the fic. You need to UPDATE! Poor Piccolo

o that is such a good idea! nice job keep it up! :)

Dude weird. That was the most weirdest and perverted fanfic i have ever read. you made Nail a fucking pervert! I naver would have pegged him for one but when i read it some how it seemed to fit him, don't ask why it just- wait this is your story why don't you tell me why. Anyway nice touch on the first time thng with evergreen, i'm still a virgin but somehow i still know what was wrong with her in that moment, please continue this one, i'd like to know more.

~Rox

OMG, Tiffany! You need to update this! I just read it all, and it is a really cool story, but you haven't updated it since last year so get a move on! ...please?

YOUSA CONFUZZLE MESA ONCE AGAIN! Mesa was all set to laugh in the beginning but yousa made it inappropriate to laugh now! :P ...And Nail is so very questionable (aka: lots of fun!)

But the end was sad...if not a little confuzzling. Evergreen's only been human for a little while, but shesa already feels her virginity is important. Is that from reading the stories and drawing conclusions from that? (Just curious!)

Mesa wanna see what's wrong with Evergreen (and Cat. Oh boy, what a coincidence, there's something wrong with both of them! ...That is kinda weird...ANYways) so update son!

YLG,

DS

Now THAT sucks! Methinks Evergreen's overreacting JUST a little...but then again I'm not a tree-turned-human so how would I know? _ Bah, she started it! *actually feels sorry for Piccolo*

Oh my god. Now that chapter was very shocking. Is she going crazy or something? If I were in Piccolo's position, I'd be very frightened at that sight! Ek. Well, please update as soon as you can! We'll be waiting. And could you make the chaps longer? Just a suggestion!

O_O oh no! Make him make her feel better! Make him love her! *sobs* POR EVERGREEN!

oh. I didn't see that coming. Not for a mile...

It was rather good though. I throughly enjoyed it. This chap gives the story new depth and everything. However, its not right for Evergreen to tell Pic its all his fault (even though most females do). She came on to him, so their equal partners in this mess. But, its still terrific.

How funny! lol

Your story makes me laugh every time!

keep it up, and please update sooner!

I'll be waiting! ;)

~A-Chan~

Oh you're welcome. Though I wasn't expecting that... At least, what Videl did. I thought she may have a bit more control... Well, I can't wait to see how Piccolo reacts to this! (Poor thing...) *evil laugh*

By the way, that pic of Pic (ya know, the one I scrolled down on). I just realized that it wasn't yours. Sorry. If you reviewers wanna know what I'm talking about (and see the awesome skills of TiffyAngel) go to:

THAT was soFUNEY. MORE WHEN YOU CAN PLEASE.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Piccolo should take her right there on the floor!

That was a funny chapter! Please update soon, I can't wait! -