| Reviews for Not Yet Paradise |
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DiddlySquishyCheeks chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 This was a delightful read! And I love the twist and don't worry, Atem isn't out of character at all! In fact it was justified when you wrote down how incredibly depressed he was. And believe me, I've had my share on different levels of depression. But enough about that! I love the part of God's and that jab at Thoth, lol. And the gang and Solomon were in a living room, because I thought they were summoned when Ra snapped his fingers. Ha, you can't deny magic anymore, Seto! And Anzu is right, they'll meet again. And man, sixty years? Kuriboh is right, Atem won't live that long by the time Yugi arrives in the afterlife. Again, amazing one shot! Wish there were more like this in multi chapters but I'll take what I can get. |
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 3/3/2016 awww...Poor Yami/Atem |
Angel-the-hedge chapter 1 . 6/21/2012 it's kind of funny that Ra is a high god and Slypher and the Tormentor arent anywhere in there |
ClosedDownForGood chapter 1 . 6/15/2012 I thought you did really well with this. I like how you kept Atem very prideful and self conscious. I also like the suddenness of the gods popping up in Yugi's living room! So, over all, I really liked it. PS. In the list of gods, you got Ammit wrong. Ammit is a girl... Just saying. :P |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 love this |
MzNightmare13 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012 I like reading stories when Yugi joins Atemu instead of Atemu living with Yugi. It's something different and not written enough. Great job I loved it! |