I have to admit, half way through this I was (for some reason) terribly scared something tragic was going to happen in this story. Don't ask. It just gave me that feeling. But Iloved it non the less! I like the way you described Erza's kid. I have one question though; yo never said whst gender Natsu and Lucy's older kid was so, which was it? I'm very curious. :p

This was really great!

OKAY OMG I LOVE THIIIIIS 3

Ahhhh this fic is beautifully written. I am so glad I stumbled across it! The whole idea of Natsu and Lucy slowly developing their relationship and taking a long time to settle down is cute and believable, and you captured the characters perfectly. Somehow I ended up slightly teary at the end...? Hahaha that was probably unintentional.

Even if you think it's not original, I think it feels a lot more natural that a lot of other Nalu fics out there. To be honest, this is eeeexactly how I hope it plays out if Mashima ever makes the couple canon.

That was awesome! Soooo cute!

So dramatically... It's great!
I can't believe i have an imagination if Natsu is soooooo handsome and cool when i read this story! XD

keep writing!

awww awesome

It's been a while since I've read a NaLu story and, to be honest, right now there's just one word I can think of to describe your fic: "beautiful" :)! Originality. I differ. You definitely have it. Keep writing wonderful stories :)!

i think i'm speechless reading this...

this is really good :D

This was a excellent story. But I got a question, Did Natsu ask lucy to marry him yet? You left that in the air?

I really love it, is lovely and stuff ;O;

The margins are really annoying on a small screen... So I've switched to using the mobile layout on my Kindle. Much better! So, even though this wasn't "original" it was still very sweet and a great read all the same. Too many fics that include the next gen kids tend to focus on the kids instead of the parents, and I think you were careful in avoiding that trap.

Cute! I love it! Do write more!

What you have written my friend is nothing short of a "Legend".

Hats off to you... :D