| Reviews for For My Sister Serenity (Though You're Far Away) |
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   Joey's Gurl-13 chapter 1 . 1/3/2004 oh my god...that was sad... i love stories about serenity and joey and that was so sad..it made me crt |
| YAMIGIRL3 chapter 1 . 11/24/2003 whoa. awesome. benjiness. it was really well written. anyway very goo . |
| Sugar Snaps a lot chapter 1 . 11/10/2003 THat was beautiful. |
| Mayshuru Expert Critic chapter 1 . 5/10/2003 Oh, my God. I'm gonna cry, I swear! Keep it up! You have talent! ::Sob:: -Mayshuru Miala |
| Sleepy Sheep Guardian chapter 1 . 1/14/2003 Very touching, I love the non-ryhming poems. Keep up the good work. |
| Music Chick chapter 1 . 11/22/2002 Very touching. Love it! |
| rainymemories chapter 1 . 10/11/2002 So many sad poems but I love sad poems...! And poems that go to the heart! *sighs* |
| Takerus Lost Angel chapter 1 . 10/9/2002 awww! This is my first reviewing for and fanfic/poem out side of digimon! keep up the awesome work! |
| bunnyfufu chapter 1 . 10/7/2002 omg such a cute poem! Short but still sooo sweet! btw thanks for reviewing my ficcie. I lub your poem very much! |
| Sakura no Kitsune chapter 1 . 10/3/2002 Helteage: This is so sweet! DTM: It shows the side that I love about Joey... Hiyami: Oh great... Helteage: Write more like this! DTM: Especially more Joey poems or fics! Hiyami: Bakura's better Helteage: No, Kaiba's the best! Millennia: -.-' |
| Locke3 chapter 1 . 9/19/2002 Another nice poem, done. You've manage to capture Joey's point of view really well and apply his emotion and feeling into this poem. I hope you will continue to do more yugioh's work. |
| krimsonkiller chapter 1 . 9/16/2002 I don't think anyone will stop you. Go for it! |
| DigiDreamerLiss chapter 1 . 9/7/2002 ~Sigh~ I love poetry. And this poem is a super sweet piece of work. It's also proof positive that not all poems have to rhyme. Personally, I prefer free-written poems. (Is that the right term? If not, then I mean poems that don't rhyme. Should have paid more attention in my English classes. Sorry. ~Grin~) Anyhow, this particular poem has won my applause. It shows Joey's love and emotions towards his sister clearly and wonderfully. Well done, Melinda. *Liss |
| Whose Liner chapter 1 . 9/5/2002 That was sweet but sorta sad. But it was cool that you got into Joey's head, and this poem shows just how (mentally) dedicated he is to his sister Serenity. How far do ya think he's gonna get in the Duel Monsters tourney? Great "Yu-Gi-Oh!" poem, write more. |
| Foreigner chapter 1 . 8/26/2002 It is indeed an interesting poem. But what does it mean? I really don't understand it. It seems almost contradictory: "Do not wait too long" "Wait and see".. And what does his duelling have to do with her going blind? And what are these things about "cards" and "ten star chips"? Is he gambling? It's all so confused.. Maybe you could tell me.. |
