this is great! why did you stop? D'8 I NEED MORE! ;)

this is amazing! the semi evil characters with their slightly (or more than slightly) twisted minds always have me attempting to figure them out.

Very interesting! I love your rhythmic wording and the appearances of your characters. Usually it's "She had brown hair, blue eyes..." etc. But here it's bone beads and black feathers! And teeth and tight skin! And I admire your description of your heroine...tattoos and short red hair and all!

By the way, you said "Epilogue" in the beginning, and I believe you meant "Prologue". Don't worry, I've made the same mistake myself.

Oh, and "Bryony" and "Saoirse", eh? Been watching Atonement lately? ;D

i loved it best book i ever really read