I have to say, this was rather adorable, as well as humorous. Very nicely written.

I'm on vacation and when I pulled out my cell phone internet and began reading this, my cousin threw the phone from my hands lol :) lucky the couch caught its fall XD I laughed at the ending a little of how they acted. Poor Roach, hates the cold and fell in a bloody freezing water.

I have to go to the beach now...we got a shitty rent house and there's a huge sand slope we have to climb up to get to it, so I have to go help my pappy...

First of all please don't get mad, but this fic kind of reminds me of another that was on here a while back titled "Missing Pieces" written by an author who has since left this site. It reminds me of Roach and Reaper on the ice and Roach nearly drowns but Reaper saves his life. Maybe it's coincidence, but it just seems awfully close.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

For a second I was like "heeey"

Then "waait..."

Then "oooh"

Trololol it was awesome XD

And thanks for those shout outs!

LOL yes my updates are slooooooooooooooooow

Lol

I write, rewrite, then write again every chapter...

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But if you read the last chapter...well...that one took a long time on purpose...trololol

But yea totally awesome right there haha

And why is it saying you aren't on my fav authors yet... .

Cool story dude, I loved it! And a small note: you wrote amnesia, but isn't supposed to be hypothermia? Well you write the story, you know :) And I have a oneshot idea, why not a oneshot about the TF141 and (or) the delta force going to do some airsoft or some paintball? :)

Haha awesome! I love the humor in the story and I love how you wrote Ghost and Roach! Well done FirstNobody... As always! :-D