Another great read.

Lovely please continue

Lol even if you made 3 book i would not read it after that ending... you just had to made this bullshit dream i just hate dreams or prophencies like that, it's disgusting for me to read fuck the fate kill Aphrodite make a harem lmao.

Utterly disgusted with what you did to Harry and Anna Beth. Fuck you.

I guess you forgot to age Harry. He can't still be 13 and his sister age 4, can he?

Not bad, except for one mistake. During the quest in the forest, you had harry fighting 'a medusa'... there is only 1 Medusa, which they killed in the prequel. I believe you meant to say Gorgan (which is the name of the species).
I noticed several similar mistakes during book 1, though I forgot to mention them at the time... They're small, but noticable, errors in what is otherwise an awesome story.
I look forward to reading the rest.

What exactly is Harry's animagus form? Also, I like the progression of characters, but Harry seems kind of over powered a lot of the time, I'm not sure if that's because he is, or just because he almost always against weak-ish people, The few good fights he gets are either legends like Ajax, or he's already weakened/blind sided. The ending was interesting, although I don't understand why the son of the god of prophesy's would even think of calling it a nightmare, and not at least a premonition.

Yikes: so is this what happened in the months Harry was missing? Could he be heading for the dark?

I can't wait to find out.

Oh Severus...what have you done?

Yikes...talk about bad dreams.

Uh oh...I think Annabeth is in for it now; after all Harry's done.

By the way, I liked the Kane Chronicles cameo a few chaps back, so well done on putting them together like this.

Nice start to the new adventure; I like how you wrote Rosa's parts and I also liked the description of the fight scenes.

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oh my... poor Harry... he never gets a break...
great sequel :)

i like the story but i think it was messed up what Aphrodite did to harry and annabeth.