Wait, wait, wait. Timeout. You mean to tell me Zera isn't dead! You'd better revive her or else!

Where to begin, greatness of story, a wonder of character study and a beautiful story
In the scant world of Shadow Raider stories, you have set a high bar for quality and imagination. I salute your wonderful endevour and pray for its finish.

i've been reading ur fanfic for a few months now, i was a very BIG fan of shadow raiders and was very upset when they cancelled that showm your fanfiction is one of the best i've ever read. It is a very good depiction of the third season of Shadow Raiders. I was a very BIG fan of coupling Pyrus and Zera. Also, in this chapter is there anything that will happen between Crystaland Sternum?
i hope u write more soon.
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MORE MORE MORE MORE ;.;!dklgjsd!

holy shit! this is great! she lives!

Fu*ing swet! i love you lol please dont take to long to add more

you've done a very good story. i can't wait for the next on. your a good writer. never stop because that's what brings the pains in life and kills the imagination

wow... such a sad chapter... at least she's stil alive, for that i am happy. your a good writer

more more more. to be blunt. great writing, kind of confusing in places but they are the bits that seem to make you think that there is more to come.

great writing again!

Xandranda

i guess thats going to be the main question for this chapter..is zera really dead..since there was no body, the possibility still remains that she is alive. The truth will be revieled sometime soon, probably in the next story to this saga which will most likely begin after the next and last chapter in this story.

Maria, to answer your q. Its a plot. I like plots in my stories.. not rainbows and bubblegum. And in the chapter before this, she had indeed crossed the line of life...not good odds of someone surviving a blast of pure energy in such a magnitude..though there is a slight possibility. *grin* but youll just have to keep reading to find out. Thanks again for reading and for the reviews! I will try not to keep you hanging for as long this time.

cheers!

P.S. updates and such are often posted first on my website and its message board.

Great stuff, but why kill off Zera? In the last chapter(s) she was alive.

Do you know how long I've been waiting for this chapter?:) I was getting desperate! But that was worth the wait. You're an amazing author. Keep going.

PS. Please tell me she isn't dead!

Wow! It keeps getting better! The discussion between Ash and Captain Blaze was great. I hope to see more of him in the next chapters. Don't stop writing please! You're the best!

is she really dead? man this is a great story! it keeps getting better and better! i like i really do

good, do some more PUH-LESE!

hey ava! wassup? got my fifth chapter up (yay! finally), and i hope you continue with your story too! man, i finally got this off my chest, and now i got to start the new one soon! :(

i like the new chapter too, but just plz continue!

-Raven out