Wow, beautiful thanks for sharing

This is without a doubt one of the greatest one shots Ive read.

Beautiful and powerful. Thanks for sharing this story. Part of me is glad you ended it here, and another part of me wants to know what happens next.

This is my most favorite story oh god it was so beautiful I can't even explain you did a fucking fantastic job on this I loved. This story I have to say it's my favorite story out of all the stories I've read and I read alot including fifty shades ,twilight, Greek mothology , and I know it's weird but teen titans lol but I loved this story

I appreciate that the contest has a word limit, but this was too easy. He should have been made to work harder...

Definitely one of the best written story i've ever read in ff. A favorite! Made me shed a tear or two, probably more than i would admit. But gratefully a feel-good ending which it deserved! Kudos to the author.

I bloody love toothpickward! such an original idea...i adore how strong bella is..I've never read a story like this..its brilliant

My mom was shot in the head when I was 16, but fortunately, I was blessed by her living another 17 years.

This was a very well-written, moving fic. Thank you for sharing!

Wow - so nice to see something good come out of such a tragedy. It took a lot of courage for Bella to forgive him.

Great story - and great use of the gif. Good luck in the contest! :-)

oh my heart hurts but that was a great ending, sometimes to move on you need to forgive and i'm glad she was able to do that. even though it was really tough at times i really liked it :)

GOOD LUCK!

iILOVE IT!

It's good that the truth is out and they can both start the healing process.

Good luck in the contest! xo

Wow, that would definitely be a harsh situation to deal with. At least we learn Edward wasn't directly responsible for her father's murder, but instead, tried to stop it.

Good luck in the contest!

:)

Wow...I don't think a situation could get more complex than this.

So glad that B and E are up for working through this. There are no real winners if they part.

Thanks for writing.