Powerful fic you have here. So much emotion and little details. It would be the little details wouldn't it?

Ending is perfect; the possibility of accepting the Not-Serah on his way to retrieve His Serah.

This was very good! I wish I could see more of this but then again I'm not sure how this story could actually expand. So I guess it's good for now to leave it as it is. Great one!

Finish this story it's very good
I rather liked it

This was brilliant, and somehow, I could honestly see this happening. It actually does set a great beginning for a longer story, and of course I'm curious as to what happens next, although it seems there's a pretty slim chance that this would be continued.

Nevertheless, this is one well-written story, and it does an excellent job at capturing the emotions Noel might feel were this canon. Anyway, I think it's impossible that the both of them didn't develop feelings of some kind for each other through the course of the game, what with all the things that happened. But I think I'm kind of rambling, so I'll just end this by saying that I love this piece so much.

This is an extremely well written tale. Although instead of a one-shot it really feels like the start of a great story, so I hope you will consider expanding it into a multi-chapter fanfic. Your portrail of Noel and Serah's reincarnation are amazing and I really want to know what happens to both of them next; and especially what will happen between Noel and HIS Serah :)

So in the off chance that you decide to expand on this I'm keeping it in my story alerts, as well as my favorites. Thanks for sharing this with us lilyun.

Too bad you aren't going to continue this story, it really does have the potential to be a great tale.

Good story. I want to be mad at Noel for hurting not-Serah's feelings, but I just can't.

Does anyone else find it weird that the game does not even acknowledge that Noel and Serah could have feelings for each other?

This seems like a really unique and interesting concept, and it is excellently written. To be honest it's a shame this is a "complete" story, you could certainly expand this into a very good multi chapter story. In fact I hope you do, :) good work!

I have a very bad feeling that Serah would refuse, now we know we musn't give him the resurrection stone. I hope this will have a longer version.

It is a shame that you marked that as complete.

I know this is meant to be a one-shot but I hope you would consider expanding this into a multi-chapter. Your writing style and characterization are so superb, I'm dying to know what might happen next. Either way, wonderful job. : )

I haven't read anything in this fandom for a while, and I'm so glad I came back for this. This was so original, so heartwrenching and so, so beautiful. You managed to carve out Serah-not-Serah's character so incredibly well while still progressing the story. Everything about your Noel makes me so sad - his bitterness especially. The dialogue between them, the want she feels and the resentment he feels... my god, it's just so intense.

Obviously, I enjoyed this a lot. You've done a wonderful job here!

c'mon Serah! Pick Noel! Else I will throw a tantrum!

This is a GREAT idea, and it definitely deserves reviews. It's an interesting take on the fact that Serah WAS in fact a Seeress, even though the game didn't drive that idea into the gamer until Serah's death.

That said, I like the thought of Serah-copies, and it really does make me wonder if the situation would turn out like Caius/Yeul, with Serah always returning to Noel and Noel just wanting HIS Serah back.

Can't wait for more,

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