Wow. This fic is pretty great!

Love it! Hope you wrote or will still write the sequel.

that how i feel when i get the wifi back on or when my mom gives me my phone in laptop ps i love your story.

This was adorable! 10/10

How... how is she 14. She was 5 in the first chapter, then you time jumped 2 years. Making her 7, then jumped 5 years making her TWELVE.. and now she’s 14? 3 years later? It don’t work like that honey...

I cried so much reading this beautiful story I wish I can read the ending but alas the last update is in 2014 and that's 5 years ago :')

Wait which story is this the sequel for?!

I like how you integrated Sookie into your story
and your original character McKenzie was great.

love a sequel! please continue.
Just a thought...If godric proposed to her and they married or bonded Eric wouldn't freak as much?

Eric is ridiculous...is McKenzie aware she is 18 and legally an adult?

Why do romance heroines ask a thousand questions, interrupt every one and in general act ignorant but the male harem in the story find it cute and endearing.

I dont understand this formula, it frustrates me as a reader.

You characters are written to be horrible.
Its a tough read.

This eric is supposed to be insane?

Where do Vampires pick up these crazy irrational women to take care of?

i hate this eric. being a jerk to a little girl is low down. yuck.