OMG, it was amazing! I loved it *_* my favorite was sebastian's part...

your right, I like sebastiens pov the best

Amazing! I think Clary's chapter is my favorite. I was also surprised when Cassie Clare took it that far in CoLS, but I think she did a good job of demonstrating how insane Sebastian really is. However, I was disappointed that there wasn't really any backlash to that scene. Not saying that Clary should have collapsed into a blubbering mess, but it didn't really seem to effect her at all. That's why I like your story so much, because I like the realistic way Clary responds. And the other two chapters are amazing too!

So is this going to be a whole story now? If so I'm really excited!

Update soon pls

It is weird that Sebastian likes his sister in THAT way.

Please finish it is awesome

:D I like it you should write more its sooo good. I totally want Sebastion and Clary together lol.

OMG this is marvellous! Hahaha I was rather shocked too though somehow it seemed kinda interesting seb would want to rape her! LOL OMG You GOTTa CONTINUE WRITING KAY? So excited

This is a Good little story, I to was surprised when Sebastian Tried to rape Clary! I can't wait for City Of Heavenly Fire to come out! :D

it was awesome do another chapter

This was really good I hope you continue the story as I really want to know where it goes!

Is this a one-shot? Please don't tell me it's a one-shot!

Love, can't wait till you publish more!

I love this so much! I finished COLS yesterday and I just love the twisted Clary/Sebastian relationship, so today I went on the hunt for some good fics and I found you, yay! I love this fic; the characterisation of Sebastian is very good and I just...gaaaaaaaah, I just love him. XD

Thank you for writing this!

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