Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing your talent. Sometimes choppy, but always heartfelt.

No i actually liked the ending it ended on a good note, i didn't expect the main villain to have a tragic backstory which was nice, because other fanfics villains are just power hungry. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Shitty bratty

I love this story! I wouldn't say I am scared of needles more than them going into the wrong place. It took the nurses five times to get an IV into my hand when I was little and they wouldn't let me see them put it in. So hence my fear of needles going into the wrong place.

Good story.

When I was a kid, I was afraid of needles. Not so much now.

Very good story I enjoyed it very much. And believe me when I say I've read stories far more explicit that this one I doubt you would be banned. Some of the stories on this webpage are beyond rated M they should be rated X lol but like I said you did a beautiful job. :)

Great story!

Love it, very creative.

I love the story so far and I love how you added Norse mythology into the mix. It works really well with Labyrinth. Also, I for one am terrified of needles but I have a good reason. Every time I need an IV the nurses have to stick me twenty times (I wish that was an exaggeration) and usually end up having to dig it around in order for it to work. Anyway, I just found that bit very relatable and funny. Good work with the story :)

Sigh... Thank you. That was nice. A bit quick into the...er, romance... Sorta drop it like a hot potato, but otherwise a good story. :3

One question, beside Nøkken used to getting what he wants most of the time(it's almost implied that their species can lose a catch[maybe he hasn't experienced it] but...?) what his reason for going back? Just curious.

A very lovely story. I am so excited to read more of your works.

I know im a year late with this but I think that Toby might be some evil spirit? I love this whole series its really good and you are so amazing at writing!

YAHOO love it alot