thumbs up

awesome..it was soooooo sweet!

So sad it had to end... would you consider a multi chapter continuation?

Not bad not bad at all

Lovvvveee itttt :D

OMG...it is awesome!Tremendously described and all...Jily rocks!

HAHAHAHAHA okay I just have to say that the last part was epic! SO FREAKING HILARIOUS! Remus doesn't swing that way? WOW who knew he could be such a joking prat!? AWESOME JOB!

That's adorable.
-Cam

Awwwwwwww! I loved this!

Well my co-writer I have to say I am happy that this story got published, I actually began writing a fanfiction surrounding the events of it, but I have to say it has turned out to be quite the fluffly oneshot huh?

This is the first time I've co-written with anyone and it's pretty awesome to see everyone's reviews :)

We'll have to co-write again sometime Lily-Flower! :P

-Prongs-

x :P

I lurved it!

That was the sweetest thing I've read up until this point in my life! It was like cotton candy, all fluffy and sweet!

That was very sweet. Too bad it ended, hope you'll write a sequal!

really sweet story. quite funny too, 'specially the end bit. i like how you've portrayed James as a sort of nervous, almost insecure person around Lily... gives your story a unique kick.

one MINOR criticism... maybe make this two chapters... around the part before their first date. feel free to ignore this as it may just be me, but i feel it lost it's flow temporarily there.

A wonderful story, I loved every sentence. It was funny but serious and good at the same time. Gosh, all I can say is that I oved it.