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You write well. Hope you keep writing and posting stuff.

They made love

I will say this first. I HATE this couple, but for some reason I clicked on it. You know how you can tell if someone is a talented writer? If they can change your point of view. You did.

i always wanted harry and hermione together but she fell for ron. It was...something. In a good way

It seems a bit too contrived, too quick, too short. Psychologically, unless the people involved make a conscious decision prior to surrendering their virginity, they associate the event with an intimate love.
I can't see the Ginny of canon accepting Harry back as a love interest or Hermione as a friend once the two of them had one another intimately.

aBsolUTe CRap

I know you didn't make this based on Harry and Hermione in being together, it would be nice to see their relationship go to the next level way beyond trust and friendship. Its like trust and lovers more like. Probably not the term use but you know what I mean. Awesome story and hope you make more

I'd say that this story needs MORE PLOT

quite good

This is crap, what kind of a friend does that?

Nice job. I enjoyed that. And that "love" bit at the end was really touching and accurate.

crap.

Ah, yes, the resident insanity present in all of us but essentially the thing that drives people to write fanfics. My insanity is making me go mad with the ideas bouncing around my head, but i can't choose which one to start off with and because of that im not registered yet. Sigh.

This story was good. A little too short but hope you make more like this one!