Reviews for A Breathless Sort of Attraction
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31
This was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
holllly shitt. i literally came twice at that dancing scene before i even could get to the sex part. (sorry if that was tmi) I had to wait an hour before finishing the story and then i came 3 times.. GOD that was hot. you sure know how to right a good smutty fanfic.
annnastasija204 chapter 1 . 3/14
Naruto is literally me... Seriously... About the fucking time... Also... This line that Ill paste below made this whole fanfiction 10x hotter...
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-"Sasuke." Without waiting for a response she leaned down and killed him.
(LOL. *kissed. I came across this mistake and burst out laughing so hard. I decided I wasn't going to correct it. I just want to let you readers know I would never do something so heartless to you guys. Just kill him mid-sex. Wow I'm just dying at my computer…How dare she? WITHOUT EVEN WAITING FOR HIS RESPONSE. JESUS. THIS BITCH.)
(…I've ruined the entire story haven't I? I would say I'm sorry but I'm not.)
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HoneyHelly chapter 1 . 1/28
The final was hillarous! "About time." Jajaja I love it! You are one of the best writers of lemon Sasusaku in the history for me!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24
This is hands down one of the sexiest sasusaku fanfics I’ve ever read. THIS is what good sexual tension is
QueenTargaryen chapter 1 . 1/21
This was soo good!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Incredibly good!
supremebitchin chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
I gotta admit this has got to be one of the hottest lemon fanfics I’ve read! Love ur work keep it up! xo
aaron chapter 1 . 9/18/2019
oh i completely loved this fic. u must be a famous erotic writer, and the part where u mistakenly wrote kill in place of kiss was hilarious! waiting for more of ur fanfics
dang-punk chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
OMG. I was hooked from the beginning but I nearly died of laughter when I read the “killedkissed typo. That’s just great.
krisaku chapter 1 . 5/31/2019
The lemon was sooooo HOT! thank u! another fantastic read :D
Birkastan2018 chapter 1 . 5/13/2019
oh my gawwwwwwwwwwd seriously no words for this! And I wholly agree with you - there are college AUs, modern AUs, etc. where SAsuSAku are in a club or at a party, but so few where Sasuke actually DANCES. and I cant understand it bc he's an Uchiha, dammit and he's supposed to be quick on the uptake, no? Of course he'd be a great dancer if he gave it a try! This was so hot, and so well written - thank you so much for sharing this with us :D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
Whewwww that dance! And I thought a washroom stall is gonna be awkward but it's sasusaku, it's sexy and wicked. Thanks for this very loooong but satisfying tension.
K4sum1 chapter 1 . 5/3/2019
Lol, that was so great fic, but from the time you wrote 'killed' instead of 'kissed' I couldn't stop thinking on it and not laugh.. it destroyed all of my mood from this wonderful peice of art xddd
Sloshi chapter 1 . 3/12/2019
LMFAOOOOOO THE KILLING PART I WAS LIKE WTFF
ALSO THIS FUCKING STORY IS SO GOD DAMN GOOD .. I WISH IT WERE MULTI CHAPTER
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