Nice story. Quite enjoyed reading it.
The age of Gohan is a bit confusing, I'm always picturing him 10 when fighting cell. I think there was some inconsitence as how old Gohan trullay was when hed died in your story, either 8 or 7.
At the start you had him feed blood to a little fox or something in the cave. I thought it meant something at first and was looking forward that it was part of the plot. I guess I got sidetracked there and it was just there to show Gohans mental state.

Ummm...

Well, I've read story and I actually pretty much liked it. If anything, I'm wondering if it would be alright for you for me use your fic as basis/inspiration or even reference? What I mean to say is, your idea for this fic was really interesting that I'm really curious if it would be okay for you to have me make use of your work as a part of something I'm writing right now or even allow me to make a spin off that would have a different outcome?

Well...

So far, the story that I'm making was about Gohan having visions/dreams about himself wherein the futures that he had were different due to the actions he made after the Cell Games. One of them was him falling into the dark side and going berserk like you did. That said, what you created was pretty brilliant and with the way it is, I'm thinking if this story of yours could be used as one of the "could have beens" that Gohan could have had...

Anyway, I'm asking for permission because when I'm going to create the story and cite some references, I would really like you to know first since it would be terrible if I just used it without your knowing. I really like your story and it gave me some inspiration which had me geared up to write more. That's why, aside from asking your permission, I also want to thank you.

That was beautifully done.
Pulls those damn heartstrings.

Amazing story _ I loved every word of it!

I wish other stories were as great as this.

This is a great Story, I loved all the details, plot twists, and conflicts. But over all I loved the plot. I hope you make more stories simlar to this one.

in my opinion the best story about gohan here

That was so sad :( But at the same time, Beautiful :')

that was one hell of a was very good not once did i get bored.a swqell would be very intresting to see how thh new baby with a soul as powerfull as gohan grows up and if he regains all his power with resons for wanting to be reborn are vfalid ones.

that was one good fight betweangohanb andgoku i relly like this fanfictand will be saving it on my harddrive after iam done reading it.

this is what i feal gohan should have done in dragonball taking credit for defeating cell and their was so much death that they new nothing of.i liked how this chapter was written.

it will be intresting too see if piccolo recognized gohan and i hope they get too talk to each outher.

i love this story

but it seems bab-gohan remembered...

I LOVE THIS STORY! man, this title sure does suit your gohan. he doesn't need to be big to truly rock the universe, afterlife and living.