I think Umbridge needs to be more than driven out of the school, she needs to be driven out of life. Personally, I think she would make a great offering to the Acramentulas...alive and breathing.

Harry is going to have even more training since he was ambushed so easily.

Not one mention of Peter during all of this about who betrayed?

I enjoyed this story. but I wish it were more fleshed out than it is. I suppose it's abandoned,. but it's still delightful.

Very good, I hope there's more!

Harry is a little ladies man XD He's a charming lil gentleman with a mind full of mischief

I wish you would explain why harry is confident and outgoing when the dursleys apparently treated him as in canon (eg no christmas presents). And you don't finish off plot points eg I presume the trip to the dungeons with Trelauney was to kill two birds with one stone but you never told us if the other boys stole her stash and what it was; harry's many trips to the forbidden forest - always to feed the dragon? - if so why did he wander into the spiders? Hagrid disappeared (I think) - did you say why? Did he ever come back? Sirius is a James bond character? - what's that all about and only covered in one sentence. There's a lot of good in this story but i'm considering giving up as its so schizophrenic, like you threw all your plot ideas in the air and then wrote them out however they fell.

If it helps, i'm not really clear what Lupin did to sirius ie I realise he messed with his mind but not why and who prompted him to act.

Really, this is great!

You have a singular talent for making magic seem like work.

IDK I liked the beginning, but the story is starting to lose my interest. In his first yr we are told he has a bunch of projects, but thats never expanded on. They don't tell Dumbledore about Sirius until the end of 3rd yr some reason. Harry having the stone is never resolved other then Flamel being mentioned after Harry returns for 3rd yr. Why would he need remedial anything for 3rd yr? When was he actually taken to the Chamber? In the book there isn't much of the school yr left, i think 2 wks. Norbert being moved isn't brought up until harry tells Hagrid, which is a pretty crappy way to go about telling someone your pet Dragon was moved w/o your knowledge. Remus and Sirius's thing still doesn't make sense. I do like the ideas about Diviation and weed though.

I love how he talked to the snake in the beginning when first hearing it. It would have been even better if the basilisk stayed out in the forrest

A very interesting story.

nice story

I really like your story. I hope that you keep writing I. What exactly happened with remus? I was kind of confused by the whole situation.