| Reviews for Alterations |
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  Bubu chapter 7 . 4/21 , it's over, plz make a sequel, like some sort of continuetion but a new begining, plz, it's ok ish I guess, past all the gross intimate stuff, anyways, not bad |
| The Man chapter 7 . 3/22/2019 XD great story. I love the idea of Saint Walker walking in to Hal strangling Razer. |
 nighthawkrising0527gmail.com chapter 6 . 10/29/2018 Nonsense you were perfect! One of the best on here! |
| Fandomgirl1012 chapter 7 . 11/26/2017 This. was. BEAUTIFUL! I have never laughed so hard! Several times, I had to stop and just laugh out loud. This was amazing and I now consider this canon, AMAZING JOB! |
| virigin chapter 7 . 9/16/2016 can you write more chapters of this story to make it more intresting |
| amazing chapter 4 . 9/16/2016 super amazing |
| Virigin chapter 6 . 9/16/2016 nice! |
| lordshuvra chapter 7 . 11/7/2015 I just want to say that 1st. the story was very good , not everyone has guts to right a lemon story between a AI robot and a red lentarn. And 2nd. Do you really wanted to right a story about aya gets pregnant because if you really wanted to do that Iam with you. |
| rrrlikeswolves99 chapter 7 . 6/26/2015 oh my goodness! that was awesome and adorable! |
| F DAT PUSSY chapter 1 . 6/25/2015 Like it says in my gamer tag want to see/read him fuck dat pussy you sleezy mothafucker he he |
| Aronim chapter 7 . 4/16/2015 Hahaha. Man, Hal was an ass for a while there. Well done. |
| Aronim chapter 6 . 4/16/2015 This was great. Sweet and well done. And quite funny too, in a good way. It bugs me that you write "okey" instead of "okay" though. |
| Daniel6 chapter 7 . 2/8/2015 Any chances for a sequel? |
| SpaceTR chapter 7 . 2/8/2015 I'm sorry, I'm French, I understand English but I can't speak it very well. I juste want to thank you, your story is funny and poignant. Honestly, I realy enjoyed ! Thanks ! |
| crystalclear123 chapter 7 . 2/6/2015 Are you going to write more chapters? Maybe how Kilowog will react when he finds out about the two will be fun |
