please update so0n.

I knew they were right to worry. Jaden would only not trust his daughter's date if he was a bad guy. He's got a knack for detecting that stuff. If the guy was trustworthy and was willing to wait, I'm sure he would have seen it. Overprotective fathers are really good at picking out the boys who can be trusted to protect their little girls.

PLEEAAASSEEEEE! upload soon! I need to know what happens next! I miss this story :'( hope you udpate soon!

great story, cant wait for update :)

Nice chapter. :) Don't worry, Alex, Daddy Jaden's there XD Anyway, sweet chapter :)

Ahh! Awesome chapter! Definitely worth the wait! I can't believe he did or was going to do that to her! he deserves whatever he gets! And jadenman to the rescue! I hope this is a long story and it doesn't just end here! Please don't make us wait very long for the next one!

Damn Jaden got angry haha with good reason though am glad Daren got what he deserved

Sweet chapter. I can't imagine how many white cars there could be. O_o I can't handle them! They're too BRIGHT! XD anyway, good chapter. I look forward to more. :)

SKoA

I knew it! Daren is such..Gah! I hate his guts ya pervert sicko! That's it Jaden and Seten finish him off! Gah XD Any ways good waiter getting selled like that for 20 bucks XDD And wanting to get 10 bucks extra...What are you going to do for them? XDD

So that's what the stand is called...I thought it was just another counter in said place...Ha just learned a new English word XD Any ways Seten you just made a moment between them gah! Failed! Any ways you didn't know so you are forgiven :3

Welp I await the next chapter, coz is getting juice X3

Peace out

BRR23

P.S. Spam review ish over :3

Steven! Wait...Wrong person XD Any ways Daren control your hormones! control them! or is your death XD And dem kaiba's must be that important 0_o Waho any ways Daren control your self! Waut time for the waiter to do his evil job :D

BRR23

Dat Bathroom 3 And yay Yubel made an appearance! :DD Any ways doing anything stupid is taking your little girls virginity...Just me saying Jay XD And as well darn talking in the cars :0 I don't even talk that much in the car...Well not a lot, but a little or joke with the fam XD Any ways I love how Daren is telling Alex about the date planss and just driving casually...My friend can't do that XD And eww he almost drool...Time to get my Puki to flamethrower his behind XD

And Daren is a snitch! Why would you point that out that, and as well stop flirting with her! Coz even the smallest compliment is flirting for a parent...Wait...Keep on complimanting her XDD

BRR23 :3

Ahh Daren...Made me laughed hard when he was left alone with Jaden...Laughed to hard that my sides hurt so much XDD Oh my ra chicken that was hilarious XDD Never leave the date alone with the father...NEVER! XDD

And Daren you better control your darn hormones! And between us at first I thought it was Jesse Jr...XDD But Daren came and I was okay we got a jock in the premisses XDD And Jaden don't get Alexis annoyed pwease, coz if you do...Ahi is going to be painful for ya XDD But nice threat by the way XDD Might use that in the future with some of my friends dates XDD

All in all nice funny chapter this one was :DD

BRR23

I so totally agree with Jaden here! Boys these days are huge perverts and like he said want only one thing from a girl! Humph Jaden I believe to do this quite well! Protect little Alex! XDD And I don't mind having that sapphire necklace and give it to Puki-chan XD

Puki:Typlo?

Not you w I will never give you something girly! Never! Any ways Onno my Typloshion is here for you :3

All in all time for thee review spam to beginning XD

BRR23 XDD

Jaden and Seten truly are spies now! But you failed with the popcorn, Seten. Tsk, tsk, tsk... Anyway, hope you can update soon!

SKoA

Dun, dun, DUN! And the spy-ness ensues! XD I wonder what the job is... Hm... XD Good chapter. Look forward to more.

SKoA