Awwww! I can't even handle the cuteness! 3333 ad;lfkja;ldkjfal. But really, that was really well written and I love it! So few people can keep both of them in character, and you did a great job :) By the way, I'm bandgeek112 on Deviantart- I drew the 'growing' picture you liked so much! The fic is coming along nicely, btw.

-this was great,and sweet loved it you did a great job.

I really liked this short story. Have you considered turning it into a longer story?

good job! soooooooo cute

Love it B)

You should know this by now, but YOU'RE AN ABSOLUTELY AMAZING WRITER!

Kyaah I love reading your stories!

Please, por favor, write more! Inmediatamente!

I didn't spot any mistakes, so, no worries.

I loved the story, it was so cute and adorable and cuddly and sweet and everything!

I should probably think of something and request it, seeing how you're an amazing writer and all.

Write more!

Gambatte!

Tess-chan

aww so sweet,

i love it!

Awesome writing job!

It was exactly what I was looking for! You're an amazing writer! Like, seriously, this was perfect. Thanks for doing my request!

Very nice. Very, very nice. I like the visulazation you provide in Zuko's anxiety. I can see his hair all messed up.

I am amazed at how well you do, being a non-native English speaker, with your writing.

I really enjoyed this.

I like it so much!... It's cute!