I loved it! Please write more!

This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing!

this is amazing! i love fics with the speedster family and your writing's great!

Everything you write gives me joy. Everything. Also I really love the dynamic you give Bart and Artemis like its pretty precious and you can tell Artemis is baffled by this weird ass kid.
Poor Wally I hope he realizes he is loved and the best at what he does the very best dang nab it.

Awwww no! Please don't abandon this!

Entertaining story so far...what else is Bart gonna reveal about the future?

Awww this is so funny and sad all at the same time!

Every word in this story is flawless. Ahh, you're perfect I'm obsessed with this its 1 am and Im grinning like an idiot. Perfect.

BWAHAHAHA omg I so love this, had me rolling on my bed in laughter xD The whole scene where Lian and Bart are introduced as newly-arrived freeloaders to the Crock-West household is just hilarious, and this last chapter as well :D I swear, if I ever find the will and time to do a comic, it will so be of that scene :D

Wish there was more, or at least if there was a chance there COULD be more, but with the update date so long ago my hopes aren't high. Still I'm writing a review, just on the off chance you need encouragement to update this story again :)

Fun fic but I dunno how many more chapters I can tolerate Wally being so well... Wally like. Wally really can be a bit of a yerk at times, can't he? He's totally my favorite superhero, but he can be rather petty at times.

This is so cute! Oh, goodness... I hope there's more. :3 I love the way you're writing Bart - As well as Wally and Artemis.

Oh my gosh ! I loved Bart's line about hitting Wally with a car.

Aww, this is great. BRING BACK WALLY! It said in "Darkest" that Wally taught Bart about Chicken Whizzies so he has to warm up to him eventually. Update soon!

Hurry up and update! Really want to see where you're going with this!:)

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