This is extremely well written, and I think is now one of my favourite one shots on here :) Your writing is absolutely beautiful. I think that you captured emotions very well, and made me care a lot for these characters. It's really difficult, I think, to make readers care so strongly for a character in such little time, but you managed to pull it off well. I would absolutely love a multi-chapter fiction of this, though because you wrote this more than a year ago, I doubt it will happen. Regardless, fantastic work and I hope you keep writing. :)

I cannot stress this enough: you are an extraordinarily talented writer and I am highly impressed by your work and effort. I barely know most of the characters here, but you make them work so wonderfully. They live and breathe fantastically and I, for one, am humbled by your work here. I was touched by Etain's story, moved by her sorrow, and felt a number of heartstrings tugged by her grief. Its a highly moving and wonderful story you've crafted here and I, for one, applaud your top notch writing on this story.

This was some of the best work I've seen here and I sincerly hope you continue it. I know I'll be waiting for another chapter. Take my words to heart: this was fantastic! and nothing less.

I love it!

It's very well-written and has great potential. If you do decide to continue, I'll definitely keep reading. After alt, there aren't enough Owen stories, especially wonderful ones like these. I'd like to see you continue and develop the relationship more. I'd also like to see Etain happy

I like you're style, but if this does become a chapter story, more direct dialogue between the characters may be in your benefit. It worked wonderfully here though.

I didn't see any flaws in the story! Very well done, and I hope to see more from you in the future.

-L'Archel

Gosh, I really love Owen and he's always so underloved by the fandom u_u This was a really heartwarming story and I really really enjoyed reading this. And Mira and Chloe and Ramsey too ugh I love seeing characters that everyone usually casts to the side. Etain seems interesting too, I'd love to be able to read more about what she's like and if there's more to the magic names and whatnot than what was just stated here. There's a ton of potential lined up here, and I would really like to see more!

Oh I love this! Owen is such an underrated character. His heart messages are just too cute. You've written him so well. ;_; Poor Etain. I love that Mira reaches out to her, too. Gives me the warm and fuzzies and whatnot.

Judging by the other reviews, the answer as to expand it into multiple chapters is a (predictable) yes. I do really love this and would like to see a little more of it, but I'm not really sure it's cut out to be a longfic. I know that kind of sounds like a veiled insult, but I mean it in the best way - you write so well, you don't really need more than 2 or 3 chapters of something like this to come away with a sense of wholeness and satisfaction, you know? So I think that it'd be great to see a little more of this, but no more than... say... 3 or 4 chapters.

It's interesting. I'd like to read more.

What ever you do please turn this into a chapter story instead of a one-timer. This is very well written and I can see that you have a lot of potential. I want to know what will happen next and to see if the two will become one. I'm sure all the readers who stop by and read it will think the same.

Sincerely,

Kishibi Shadows