Reviews for Chipped
fatcatjohn chapter 8 . 10/4/2018
You know this story has so much potential of being one of the best stories in fanfic, but won't be because you have up on it. you say you have writers block, then ask us readers for opinions that will maybe give you a direction to put the story in. For example. Sasha is successful in taking the letter from Hale without him entering the store so Dani doesn't see Danny yet so they both leave. Nyx reads the letter and after some excitement decided to go to the arena, but Danny is suspicious when he heard the name Dalv. Reluctantly, Danny agrees to go with them. Sasha joins them as well. The four of them are traveling to the arena when they get jumped by thieves and taken back to their hideout to their leader. The leader is the decendent of jazz and is actually a resistance fighter. she meets nyx Danny and they talk about how dalv is evil and how they have a plan to overthrow him. She also says that Baxter is her husband. Danny apologizes for getting him locked up. They go into a war tent and start discussing how to take him captive during a party that's held a day before the fights. Then an explosion is heard outside and they realize they are under attack by some enforcers. Salem then sees a tracking device was placed in sasha and they destroy it. Hale has Dani round up the thieves to be arrested. Luckily nyx, salem, sasha, and Danny escape. And continue towards the arena, but not before Dani sees Danny for a moment before they escape. She is about to go after him to make sure but Hale calls her back. Danny and co. arrive at the city the arena is at and head to it. they go in and watch a match that already started. Danny eyes widen as he sees two ghosts he recognises. Skulker and Johnny 13. The two ghosts battle it out and skulker wins. The announcer says skulker is the winner and Johnny now belongs to the other contestant. They see the owner of the ghosts is just a small girl around the same age as salem. The group goes to the castle and are accommidated with nice rooms. Later that night Danny goes exploring and finds the dungeon which has Baxter in it but it's doors are guarded so he starts to go back to his room only to be pounced on by Dani. They have a happy reunion and head to Danny's room to talk. Dani tells Danny everything about what happened after he disappeared. Hale is secretly listening to everything and reports his findings to vlad. The next day Danny is taken to the arena. Danny is next and goes into the arena but keeps his cloak on with his hood over his head. The announcer says that Danny is going to face the current reigning champion. People start cheering as he notices a cloaked figure standing on the middle with something on its back. The announcer says ladies and gentlemen, I give you the one and only, Ember mclain. Ember throws off her cloak and grabs the mike. Tell me who you love she yells and the crowd starts screaming her name and her hair flared up. Ember takes the guitar off her back and plays a few chords that sends costs at danny. Danny dodgs all of them and throws ecto beams at her. She dodged too. After a few minutes. Danny decides to finish it quickly and used a ghostly wail. It drains him but she is defeated. She gets up and walks over to him and pulls off his hood revealing who he is. She says thats impossible, but then does something unexpected and kisses him. The crowd goes nuts and they exit the arena. Later that night. Ember explains to Danny what happened to the ghost zone after he left. Pariah dark manages to escape his coffin again and most of the ghosts escaped to earth to get away. That same day was broke out on earth and all ghost portals were destroyed. And for some reason natural portals stopped appearing altogether. So all ghosts that escaped are now trapped on earth and the rest are stuck in the ghost zone with pariah. Most of his enemies were on earth already when pariah broke out. Without danny, amity was easy to takeover even though they still had to deal with sam and tucker. Danny gets sad again and ember tried to comfort him. Danny confused by her affection asks why she isn't trying to kill him. She confesses that after he disappered, she couldn't explain why but she missed him. danny and ember are about to kiss again but are interupted by hale who throws them in prison.

I'm gonna speed things up cause my thumbs are beginning to hurt from texting this on my phone.

They get captured. They escape with hale and danis help. Vlad fights danny. Vlad loses. Baxter and jazz super great grandaughter run the country now. A portal opens up and Danny and ember fly in. They fight pariah dark together. Ember saves Danny at the cost of her afterlife. She tells him she loves him just before she dies. Danny gets angry and defeats pariah. Then goes to find clockwork. Clockwork sends him back to his time. Danny changes the future by stopping th was and making sure pariah stays banished. Fights ember again, but flirts with her while doing so. He makes a bet saying if she wins she can take over amity but if he wins they have to go on a date. She agrees and they charge at each other to fight. He wins and knocks her out. She wakes up in her lair with a note and a rose on her table that reads I'll pick you up tomorrow at 8. Angry she lost she crumpled the note up and tossed it. Then sees the rose and sniffs it, then smiles.

The end.

There I gave a shit ton of ideas to work with. Use all of them, or none of them, I don't care, but please continue the story.
Artwindflow chapter 8 . 3/23/2018
2018 and not update. I'm dying. Please it's being too long ago since you work on this fic but please continue it. There are people who will love to see an update.
dontaskk chapter 8 . 8/20/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE! I REALLY REALLY WANNA READ MORE!
roxal3611 chapter 8 . 1/29/2016
ALL OF YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING. but omfg why do you always have an end at the most dramatic/interesting part XD I literally yelled at my screen when I read the last bit of this
SparkleSeas chapter 8 . 1/26/2016
This is a really good story, I want more!
NyteXade chapter 8 . 1/13/2016
Wow this was an amazing story! I do hope you continue it, I look forward to reading more of this!
Serulium chapter 8 . 5/21/2015
No! Danny was about to find someone! Why did it have to end there?! It was so good! That part with the cloaks and Danny actually had me crying! Quite literally. It was so sad and emotional. Thank you for the story. It is a shame it had to end here.
Fear the Fuzzy Bear chapter 8 . 4/23/2015
Aww... just when it was getting exciting! This is so original, you can't just stop it here!
Sammie chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
Ugh, cliffhangers.. Can't wait for the next chapter!
cryptologicalMystic chapter 8 . 8/10/2014
Holy crap, it's Dani! This is either going to be awkward-plus-hugs or so-close-but-yet-so-far...
theyoungphoenix chapter 8 . 8/8/2014
YAY YOU UPDATED! I'm am
Like super excited for the next chapter. If you need help with anything you know where to reach me! Eek!
Auburn chapter 8 . 8/7/2014
I finished the last chapter and I was so frustrated because there wasnt any more. :) You did an amazing job with the chapter and did not fail to dissapoint. I cant wait for Danny and Danni to meet! I love this story and youve definetly got me hooked. I'll keep an eye out for more chapters. And Im holding you to updating! I hope you get over the writers blick soon, that suff sucks! :) Updaaaaaate!
Distant Radiance chapter 8 . 8/7/2014
I really like this story! I am really hoping you plan on updating it more often! I had to reread it because it had been so long since I've read it. I still enjoyed it as much as I did the first time I read it! I look forward to the next chapter.
Tessers2899 chapter 8 . 8/7/2014
I like what u did with the story but I feel bad for Danny and I love the creative names of the characters and the complexity of the past of everyone
DB-KT chapter 8 . 8/7/2014
So excited to see this new chapter! :D I wonder how Danny and Danni would react when they see each other?
Anywho, can't wait to read more!
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