I cried, for 2029839282839392983933983839838383838 centuries because of the ending I decided to re-read it so so I could actually " listen" to what Len was saying

You know what could have be an alternate ending/story, was if Rin turned out to be the enchantress all along and relieved that everything was all a test. Which would be kinda sad cos Len would realise he was tricked and Rin was in fact an act. That would be such a twist! Muhaha~
But anyway, brilliant story dude! Look forward to reading more

Ok i was pretty sad that rin had to die when she gave birth to her second child, but hey! The Story is good, it has a mixture of sadness and hapiness just like Clannad. Im putting it on my top 3 favorite rin and len fanfic hipe everyone agrees about rins death and may yo guys have an enjoyable life!

Rin/Mikuo! PLEEEAAASSSEEE? I love Rin and Len, and the majority of my favorite vocaloid stories are Rin/Len, but I feel Rin/Mikuo need MORE LOVE!

Milan or Sleeping Beauty !

please do Len x Rin little mermaid version!

A sad ending... ... Poor Rin, to think that she'll die... This is the saddest story I've ever read... Nice...

Omg... this the BEST spinoff ever!... Nice story...

I loved the story.
I even cried.
Why did Rin had to die

I fucking hate you and your sad ending good story by the way

This is too tragic. But overall it was AMAZING. Akdjcnskcc,I fell in love with this story((д))(;;) I feel bad for Len and Rin ;-;. The feels are rushing-. Huhuhuhu (_)(;ຶДຶ ).

I nearly cried reading the endi-screw that(pls mind the language),i AM for rgis wonderful story!

Too lazy to log in but I'm planning to log in and fav this fic. You know, I have guessed the entire story and my guess is right, but I AM STILL CRYING IN THE END AND I COULDNT THINK STRAIGHT AND PLEASE this is awesome.

Okay, don't mind if there's something wrong with review /ahahah

Oh guys, I am crying so much! You guys just... can't see it...

Oh my god, I am crying so much. You guys just... can't see it...